Creative Writing Add On To This, Please?

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  1. Mika-chan

    Mika-chan New Member

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    Theis is just an add on story, thet I have NO idea how it's going to turn out... Have fun!


    A young girl stood in the hallway of Yukaidaysan High School. She wore a school girls uniform and her hair was shoulder length and black. Her bangs White...
     
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    Mika-chan, Nov 27, 2002
  2. LinaInverse

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    And her eyes a dark purple getting darker and darker and.....
     
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    LinaInverse, Nov 27, 2002
  3. That guy!

    That guy! Expecting Father

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    she explodes!!!! (BOOM!)

    But it wasn't really an explosion, but she finds herself transported into a world with eyes all around her.
     
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    That guy!, Nov 28, 2002
  4. Mika-chan

    Mika-chan New Member

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    "wh-what the hell is this?" She looks around confused. She shakes her head and...
     
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    Mika-chan, Nov 28, 2002
  5. k0gepan

    k0gepan New Member

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    ....wonders where that daydream came from. It must be all the toaster strudels she'd had for breakfast. She began to walk to her first class...
     
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    k0gepan, Nov 30, 2002
  6. Nephilim_X

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    ... and trips and falls. Suddenly a handsome man walks up...
     
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    Nephilim_X, Nov 30, 2002
  7. Little Washu

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    And helps her up, He asks her if she's ok. She says.....
     
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    Little Washu, Nov 30, 2002
  8. Nephilim_X

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    "Oh, thank you very much! My name is...
     
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  9. *Sasami*

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    "Natalie, and may I ask for yours?"
     
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    *Sasami*, Nov 30, 2002
  10. Little Washu

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    .....I'm Spencer, I'm new here maybe you can show me around sometime......
     
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    Little Washu, Nov 30, 2002
  11. Nephilim_X

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    "... Im new in town. My family just moved in, and I..."
     
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  12. Little Washu

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    Am having a hard time ajdusting to the new neighborhood.......
     
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    Little Washu, Nov 30, 2002
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    Then Natalie says, "I'm sure you'll adjust to it eventually because you seam like the tipe of person who can handle anything........
     
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    *Sasami*, Nov 30, 2002
  14. Hikaru

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    ...the man smiled at her remark. He looks off into the distance...
     
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    Hikaru, Dec 1, 2002
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    .......and he stares for a moment and than Natalie says, " Is something wrong".......
     
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    *Sasami*, Dec 1, 2002
  16. Mika-chan

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    He shakes his head and looks back at her, his eyes embracing.
    "No, Nothing is wrong."
     
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    Mika-chan, Dec 1, 2002
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    ..."I was just staring at that strange looking eight foot long catepillar climbing that building outside." He looks wistful again and then looks deeply into her eyes and says...
     
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    k0gepan, Dec 1, 2002
  18. Nephilim_X

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    "Everything is as it should be..." and he began to laugh, in an evil fashion, and then suddenly she noticed the insignia on his shirt. It was a...
     
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    Nephilim_X, Dec 1, 2002
  19. Hikaru

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    ..strange logo she'd never seen before. What does it stand for? she wondered. It consisted of 3 dark colors and...
     
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    Hikaru, Dec 1, 2002
  20. Nephilim_X

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    a cinnamon bun. Natalie said "Mmm, cinnamon buns! I love them so much, I could..."
     
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    Nephilim_X, Dec 1, 2002
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