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........who you really are........

 

...along with what you really are...

 

... "That's for me to no and you to find out."...

 

"...you don't belong with humans--"

Natalie catches this and screams, "What's that supposed to mean?"

 

.... he laughs "again that's for me to know and you to find out."

 

....."Please tell me what you mean by that.....What does it have to do with me.........."

 

... "You shall soon know all the answers to your questions"...

 

.............."But Where are we going?".......................

 

............. "to another world" ................

 

Suddenly they were flying the air faster than before. Natalie was screaming at the top of her lungs.

"Ahhhhhhhh! What do you mean 'another world'?"

Raichyte had to yell over the whistling, "Just what I said, another world! I'll explain when we get there!"

 

...............Raichyte calmly landed on his feet. Natalie on the other had didn't make such a graceful landing..............

 

"Omph! Ouuuu..." Natalie had fallen down and was now attempting to get to her feet, but her legs felt like jell-o after that ride.

Raichyte bent to help her up. "Here," he said, "Now take a look around..."

 

........It looked familar to Natalie. "I feel like I've been here befor."............

 

.......But why do I have that feeling?.............

 

The scenery was beautiful. A spiring castle lay in the distance...

"How?..." started Natalie.

"Come with me," said Raichyte as he took her hand...

 

.....Do you rememmber anything? he asked

...........I do but it was in a dream I thought.....not for real....

 

"Actually," he began, "It was a dream. You see, this is The Dream World."

Natalie had to let that sink in...

 

.........."and you are destined to be it's queen." "But what is it?" Natalie asked. "it's a world where all dreams are made and then distributed. there hasn't be a queen to make them in so long people in the real world have lost all hope."...........

 

Natalie thought for a moment and suddenly burst, "So that's why Spence was being so opressive! He thought that he had no hope of me ever wanting to be his girlfriend!"

Raichyte thought on this,"Yeah, basically, Natalie. People lose hope that life will get better for them and lose hope in their dreams."...

 

Raichyte realized she hadn't heard him say she was to be queen.

"Natalie, they need a queen. That's you..."