Creative Writing All I can give.

Hmm. I haven't posted my work in awhile. This poem was inspired by Nirvana and dedicated to Trey Taylor..who shall be joining this forum soon.

Waking up every morning isn't simple
I'm filled with all those shadowed days
but I can make you I promise right now
I'll make sure your's aren't the same way
I can't always be the prettiest girl
Or make all your friends all envy you
But I can be the girl all your friends say..
Would go anywhere and do anything for you
I can't always say exactly what i'm feeling
Or be able to explain what things mean to me
But I can assure there won't be a single thought..
Not filled with all our good memories..
Now, I give you all I can give you
I hope for once it'll be good enough
I hate those girls in they're perfection
when I all I can hand you is love. <3

 

I liked it once I was able to read passed the mistakes.

I want to meet this Trey guy! He's got you writing poetry and the likes...

 

Lol. Now, thank you. You can..he's myspace and YAHOO and..he's been a bit tied up on the Everquest Forums so he can't joint this one right now. <3
But, thanks for the compliments on poetry. Here's some kinda poem I wrote from the view of Aerith...Wierd considering.

I met someone who changed my life the other day
He saved me with a large iron sword from demons
and I think mabye my life has started to change
I've been running from the cruel people for awhile
All by myself. Never fearing. Sometimes crying.
But when I'm around him and the crew I smile.
I'm constantly in a rush and they have to save me
Making me appear weak and feeble to them
And deep inside this heart of mine it shames me
So many battles within myself to seek and defeat
and when I look into Cloud's eyes I see exasperation
There's so much i've got to deal with inside of me
How am I supposed to help him burn bright
when i'm waging a war of confusion on myself
For some reason I just can't seem to get it right
I see others trying to help and it ends all in vain
I think mabye i'll be different and save him
and that drives me to the point of being insane
They tell me i'm wrong, but i've waiting my whole life
I didn't know what I was really waiting for
But now I know this right. This is the time.
You saved me. Now, it's no time for weakness.
My troubles are being put aside. I have to leave you behind.
To heal the world and you of all it's sickness..
We'll meet again one day.
I save so many with a prayer.
so now I know I have a price to pay.
Goodbye Cloud.

 

Really enjoyed this line. I think it is true to many woman.

To cute. ^_^

Awe how sweet.

Like the poem loads aka lots.

 

Once again..dedicated to Trey. Sometimes, you know? When your with someone who you think is pretty much unmatched by anyone..you don't feel good enough. v_v I guess that's just apart of love.

Thanks, Basher and NeoNoodle.