Creative Writing Bare with me. = Moved from REC.

I had to delete the other thread and create another one in the Creative Writing Forum.

This poem is a story in the beginning. Then it switches over to my point of view.

( He says this to me..)

Baby, please calm down. I'm on my knees.
Please, just sit down. Stop doing this to me.
I know your angry, I know you can't help it
I know there's been hard stuff you've dealt with
Just don't take it out on me, I love you.
I just don't undestand the stuff you do...

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I don't want to tear you apart
I don't want to break your heart
I know you've been let down so much
and your using my love as a crutch
I'm trying to make myself better
So we can always be together
It's just been getting so hard
To keep myself from falling apart
I get angry alot, please bare with me
I just need time, don't be scared of me
I promise i'll make it all better soon
If not, this relationship is doomed
I love you too, always remember
I just need time to get myself together

I'm sorry.