Creative Writing Closed Door

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  1. Basher

    Basher Mad Writing Skillz

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    A door appeared
    You opened it
    And on its hinges it swayed
    Rocking back and forth
    With every swing
    It got smaller and smaller
    Only needing two days
    Until it reached
    Its place in the frame
    Locking in place
    Finally from what you said
    I sealed my heart forever
    I could take no more
     
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    Basher, Mar 25, 2007
  2. Yossarian

    Yossarian Yossarian Lives!

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    Nice... I take it you wrote this after you became single...
     
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    Yossarian, Apr 25, 2007
  3. Ashika

    Ashika This thing is so short...

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    very well written, it makes the reader understand
     
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    Ashika, Apr 25, 2007
  4. Bloodberry

    Bloodberry Bloody Berry
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    looks pretty well conveyed to me =p
     
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    Bloodberry, Apr 27, 2007

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