Creative Writing Coming Home.

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  1. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    I count the hours til I reach my destination,
    Coming back around to see a few old faces.
    I nearly done with my drinking alone,
    Got liquor on my mind and it gets me places.
    A cigarette hanging from my lips,
    The body of a god at arms length
    You on my mind, I can't shake this feeling
    That maybe you're the key to inner strength.
    You say rest awhile,
    I say I'm burning up.
    I wanna set fires,
    You say enoughs enough.
    Passed out on the floor,
    Feeling what I feel for you,
    Got me circling back once or twice,
    I'm not sure what to do.
    Pissing away my summer with my mind in the gutter,
    Almost sure you're ready for one quick run in,
    Can't believe I'm saying this but take me now.
    I guess it's up to fate to decide if I get to see the sun again.
    I'm coming back home,
    To a place where I grew.
    With a life I never lived,
    And a love I never knew.
    I'm coming home now,
    Pretty presistant to see you again.
    My hearts in the right place,
    No way I can win.
    So, here I come,
    There you go.
    Sure as I've said before,
    You're someone I'll never know.
     
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  2. Lance Leingod

    Lance Leingod The White Blade

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    Good poem....and sad T_T
     
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  3. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    Thanks. ^^ Yeah, I guess it is alittle sad. I was quite sad when I wrote it honestly. =/
     
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