Creative Writing Conversations in Haiku

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  1. Bloodberry

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    aside from this post, practice your haiku skills.
    5-7-5 is the syllable pattern.
    make beautiful little haiku or just respond to person's haiku IN haiku. (we're doing this in another forum and it's really neat. *^-^*) stay with the pattern or the post will be edited for you *^^*

    have fun!

    lesse...maybe a topic for the haiku? i'll change topics later for everyone.

    Rainy Days --- there's the topic fer ya'll! *^-^*

    [berry]let's skip the element part cause well...you can, or you don't have to for this,...nothing proper going on in here...lol but you can if ya want...[/berry]
     
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  2. k0gepan

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    Rain softly patters
    I lay quiet, listening
    I drift off to sleep


    hehe, rain always makes me sleep when it's nice and soft on the sloped roof in my room. mmmm, relaxing. ^^
     
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  3. Blue Crow

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    Everything is wet
    Rain collects in big puddles
    I will stay inside

    :)
     
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  4. Migoto Neko

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    As well as the syllable requirement for a haiku, it is also supposed to make reference to one of the four seasons AND mention something ephemeral and something permanent. Mentioning rain would cover springtime.

    Oh, the rain outside
    I hope it stops very soon
    nice and warm in here
     
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  5. Migoto Neko

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    more posts here?

    This thread could be fun...
    any haiku poets here?
    don't be shy, write back!
     
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  6. Blue Crow

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    The rain splashes down
    The flowers aren't thirsty
    They could use a bath

    :confused:
     
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  7. Gohan_Darkmoor

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    Haikus are fun!!!!

    water falling down
    Heavens crying soundly now
    will it ever end?
     
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  8. k0gepan

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    NEW TOPIC!

    Sandwiches!!


    I open the fridge
    cheese, mustard, meat, mayonnaise
    so many choices


    k0ge hungry.
     
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  9. Gohan_Darkmoor

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    Heres mine!


    Getting so hungry
    Too lazy to cook something
    Sandwich saves the day!
     
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  10. ::ZodiacStone::

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    hmm...What should I choose?
    Ham, Bologne, and cheese, yah
    Now where is the bread?

    Does this work? It's my first time so sorry if it isn't!!
     
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  11. Migoto Neko

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    Animals eat plants
    Slaughter those fine animals
    Just for a sandwich....
     
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  12. Blue Crow

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    Yay!It's sandwich time!
    I devour it quickly
    Not a crumb is left
     
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  13. Gohan_Darkmoor

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    heres another sandwiche one:

    food is good, its true
    Sandwiches are food indeed
    Its lunchtime, lets eat!!!!

    okay that one was kinda wierd, but whatever ^.^ btw, if you guys would, go to FF7FanFic and read it! I would like any criticism, good or bad
     
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  14. UFOtaku

    UFOtaku Wachu loorkin at?!

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    haiku only please, :)
    here we all practice writing,
    please do post again!


    that was very bad,
    maybe i will try again,
    but first, someone post!
     
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  15. ::ZodiacStone::

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    UFOTaku,
    Your sig is way to long, Yup!
    Read the sig guidlines!:)
     
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  16. Migoto Neko

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    What a tactful way
    of mentioning an error
    kind, and clever too
     
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  17. DrunkLeprachaun

    DrunkLeprachaun Tetsu Oushi

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    A day in the life,
    One man died a death eternal,
    Died a wise fool.

    But what does it mean?
    Does it have any meaning?
    A pleeb would think so.
     
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  18. ::ZodiacStone::

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    LOL, thank you
    It is my job at being,
    Kind and very smart too. :)
     
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  19. Gohan_Darkmoor

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    you all are so nice
    You're quite good poets as well
    nice being with ya'll

    what is the subject
    that we should haiku about
    i just love haiku's
     
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