Creative Writing Happiness

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  1. Peachy

    Peachy ☆liberal HMod☮

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    In tears as I write this. Inspired by "Already There" - Lonestar.

    There's a light of a promise of happiness
    I see in your eyes that i've never seen

    All i've ever glanced at in your eyes so far
    have been mixed emotions about everything

    and now that I see you with a smile
    I can't take that away. I can't say no.

    It'll take every inch of my heart to do it.
    But I know i've got to let you go..

    I can imagine a picture of a future
    Burning so bright. Filled with light.

    I'll have to endure alot of lonely nights..
    and many times i'll have to cry..

    But just knowing that you'll be happy..
    gives me the strength to say it's alright.

    I love you.
    Follow your dreams.
    Whatever is in them.
     
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  2. Yossarian

    Yossarian Yossarian Lives!

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    Finally a poem I can relate to...

    Nice work Tiff.
     
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  3. Basher

    Basher Mad Writing Skillz

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    Wow. Nice.

    I want to hear what inspired you...
     
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  4. Peachy

    Peachy ☆liberal HMod☮

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    My boyfriend..eh. He was going to join the army and was pretty set on it. The army didn't accept him because of medical reasons so..

    the only thing this poem can stand for now is the fact my mom is trying to get me to move away with her. >.<
     
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