Creative Writing Hollow.

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  1. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    I dream in color,
    An infinite menagerie of tapestry
    In which things hold no real form,
    Yet always have solidity.

    I touch nothing while there,
    Keep no real interest in the happening
    Yet all the same I struggle to grasp
    all that is shared in these trappings.

    I fear rejection,
    And benefit from the fall
    From grace, I tumble down the stairs
    In avoidance of your call.

    I look out the window
    Of shattered and jagged remnants
    Where glass and metal had merged,
    Willing to pay penance.

    I am alone,
    Among many who soak in sorrow,
    Feeling not the slightest bit upset,
    But in fact, rather hollow.
     
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  2. Peachy

    Peachy ☆liberal HMod☮

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    Dream.

    That is beautiful Chance. You were always the awesome writer. =/

    [I accidently put a thread I was posting in this thread. ;D]
     
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  3. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    Thank you, Peachy. I'm glad you think that. :3
     
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  4. Basher

    Basher Mad Writing Skillz

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    Ditto here. I can see how much your writing style as improved over the years.
     
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