Creative Writing Just a blur.

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  1. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    It all started with the red taint of a lie,
    Devouring everything we had essentially,
    Bringing out the best of me, the worst of me,
    All of me that you now see.

    Everything.. I believe.
    But from this was a cruelity,
    Perpetually undying.
    Keeping me crying, fighting, hiding.

    I hate you.
    Not really officially,
    And I know eventually,
    I won't feel anything.
    Not a thing felt by me..

    And I hate this.
    Well, not to the point of conceit.
    I mean, I will not admit defeat..
    Need for me to repeat once more or so?
    Compete without defeat.

    What a moto!
    I can hold my head up high,
    Touch the sky, and pray you die..
    Why? You know why.

    Because..
    It all starts with the red taint of a lie.
     
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  2. Lance Leingod

    Lance Leingod The White Blade

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    Nice poem...again, it was sad T_T
     
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