Creative Writing Not Going Home.

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  1. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    Noone runs faster then you do,
    Like you've got somewhere to go.
    Somewhere safe and sound,
    Secluded from the harm you know.
    Keep it secret you say,
    You're in this to stay safe.
    And as I watched your huddled mass weep,
    I know the consequences are too great.
    I can't let this eat away at you.
    I can't pretend it's not happening right in from of my eyes.
    You can't sit there, afraid to leave your room,
    While my nights are haunted by your cries.
    They want you home though,
    They bang at the door shouting thunder,
    They call to you like a gail,
    Waiting for your one slip up; That one blunder.
    But you, you're so perfect in your fear.
    Far too naive to say go away, Far to cautious
    When they whisper your name in the night.
    You're so very precious..
    So pathetic, So uninformed.
    So very lost.
    Your like a fire burning down to its embers,
    You want to go home at any cost.
    But I won't let you leave here with your tail between your legs,
    I can't see you being dragged out by the hair on your head.
    It's only anger that fuels them, not love.
    I'm sure they want nothing more then to simply see you dead.

    [bored? Oh yes..So very bored.]
     
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  2. Lance Leingod

    Lance Leingod The White Blade

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    It made me think of people collecting bills from other people :p

    Anyway, good peom.
     
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  3. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    Thank ya. =) Yet again a feat of pure boredom. And does anyone know why I have 900 friends on flippin' myspace? Why do they keep adding me?! T_T
     
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  4. Yukiko

    Yukiko New Member

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    I like it.. its sad.. Cause you likable?
     
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  5. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    Thanks. It is a sad one..
    And yeah, maybe..>.> Potential stalkers? Yummy.
     
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