Creative Writing Pieces.

I find pieces of you scattered all over my life,
Burying my pain in days gone by.
You haunt my every move, make me feel alive.
Yet all I can do is watch you pass by.
My love, it still clings as the blood hits the floor,
You can't imagine up a person to love you more.
I was there for you, grew cold for you,
Made my life one giant mural of you.
And still you make mention of all my faults,
I'm all worn down by verbal assaults.
I'm crying and dying and slightly sick,
My world is a spiral as I spin into panic.
Nothing can help me as I'm going down,
Without your love I might just drown.
I feening and faking being alright,
As I wait for you for most of a night.
I miss you, I love you, I obsess.
I cut, I burn and I regress.
Going down, down, down until my eyes shut entirely.
Then you walk in and I'm uplifted completely.
I thank you, I make you realize my feelings
And you just smile which sends my mind reeling.
Love me, love me, love me!
Or just let me be.
I can't keep playing this off as a crush,
I had you once and it wasn't enough.
Miss me, love me, obsess over us!
Damn me for trying to trust.
I don't need you,
I can't be with you.

 

Nice work like always

That makes me think of Kenshin in the manga where he kills Tomoe and she's bleeding right there. Sad T_T

 

Maybe oneday I can write a poem that has nothing to do with kenshin..>.>

 

It makes me think that

Good poem anyway

 

Rather interesting poem Lucky.

Has to be my favorite line.

I must say I am at cross. It makes me wonder a few things. Like I thought it was this person hurt themselves for another and then at the end didn't care.

 

Heh, well that's a lovely way to put it Basher. I think when people hurt, they bleed alittle inside, not so much outside unless we got a major emo in our midst. I like this poem as well guys, makes me think of just how far one will go to retrieve a lost love.