Creative Writing Poems..

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  1. Zanza

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    I thought of posting some of my poems in the Mics forum, but I changed my mind because it was too crouded ^^;

    Well, here they are, and as long as they are here, you cannot steal them!! [Yeah right!! Like someone is going to like one of them!!:sweat:]
    This one is kind of known by few people here :p
    Enjoy..

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    Life..

    Things we have gone through,
    Those aren’t well enough too.

    You go through a bad way,
    Which not the people say.

    They say a day for you a day on you,
    No, no, it is not true.

    What I see very different from the truth,
    It is a day for you ten days on you.

    If you agree with then tell me,
    why did it for us have to be.

    This is fate that no-one can change,
    Then join me to get out of this cage.

    This is life, get with it tight,
    Don’t go back from it and fight.

    You will get in the bottom,
    Prisoner from autumn to autumn.

    Don’t see the negative side of life,
    You have been with it since you were five.

    Don’t think of thing drive you fizzy,
    You will be feeling more than dizzy.

    Go with life and be it friend,
    Until god decide when it end.

    If you are then sit on all the bays,
    And think of it in all it ways.

    If you can’t find an answer,
    Experience is available from elder.

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    Thank you for your precious time..

    - Take care :)
     
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    Zanza, Oct 20, 2002
  2. Mika-chan

    Mika-chan New Member

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    wow Zanza... that's cool! I love poetry and it's fun to write it too! I have some poetry of my own, but i don't have it with me at the moment. If you want to read any of it, let me know and I'll look for some of it! ^^:catgirl:
     
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    Mika-chan, Oct 21, 2002
  3. artemis836

    artemis836 Vampire Slayer

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    The Climb

    The sting of sweat in my eyes
    I must reach the summit for only that matters
    The sun burns warm on my back
    As I reach out for a strong hold
    I find one in a familiar crevice.

    Rest can come now that I am safe
    So, I look down at what I have left behind
    It looked so difficult at the time but now
    It is merely a pungent memory
    A memory of pain and reward

    I slip
    The shear rock face flies by as I fall
    My familiar crevice has failed me
    The dark ground spins closer and closer to reality
    My last sunset is beautiful

    May 31, 2001
     
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    artemis836, Oct 21, 2002
  4. Mika-chan

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    That's yet, another cool one. Both artemis and zanza are better than me... I have an un-finnished one... here. Maybe.

    Life
    I lay here
    Seemingly helpless...
    Maybe lifeless...
    no one knows.
    My life is just a black hole of Nightmares.

    I have a demon side,
    I have a human side...

    My demon side goes out murdering loved ones
    As my human side pleads with her to have mercy.

    My kind hearted personality will turn into a *****y demon in an instent of being threatened or weakened.

    My demon, when trapped,
    will be crude to my human...

    I ask myself one queston as I lay here.
    "Is my life meaningless?"
    I lied... I ask Two.
    "Am I just a souless shell that lies here empty?"
    No one answers me.     Everyone is mute. I lie to myself... This bloody hell called 'Earth' can be...
    well It can be paradise and it can be Hell.
    The only thing is is that I don't tell myself that...
    'Cause maybe, just maybe... I can hide away.

    October 4 2002
     
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    Mika-chan, Oct 21, 2002
  5. Zanza

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    Thanx you guys, I like yours more though ^^;
    Here are few more that I just thought of when I was bored:

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    I know that you think of me as a child,
    that's why you don't want to like me like I do.

    You will never have these feelings I have,
    no matter what I do!!

    I'll have to accept that you love me not...

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    Here is another:

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    I want you to be there for me,
    I want you to be gere, next to me,
    I want you to shade my tears,
    I want you to throw my fears,
    I want to feel your heart next to mine,
    I want you to show me what love determine..

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    Pathatic, isn't it? :sweat:
     
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    Zanza, Oct 21, 2002
  6. artemis836

    artemis836 Vampire Slayer

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    Naw, they're good! Better than mine. I'd post another, but I've only written one poem...

    I'm not much of a writting person.
     
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    artemis836, Oct 23, 2002
  7. Zanza

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    Noo!! I love your's, its better than mine!! Heck, even a kid can write better poem than me ^^;

    Anyone can feel free to post their poems over here you know :)
     
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    Zanza, Oct 23, 2002
  8. Mika-chan

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    Nu, Zanza... Your's are MUCH better than mine!
     
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    Mika-chan, Oct 24, 2002
  9. keence

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    I think that your poems are great and all the poems on here are great.
    their a lot better than I can do and for a fact I have read some of Mika's poems, they're good.
    Just keep writing them you will probably get better than you already are which is good.
     
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    keence, Oct 26, 2002
  10. Mika-chan

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    Why thank you very much Keence and hi!
     
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    Mika-chan, Oct 26, 2002
  11. Mika-chan

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    Why do I do this?
    Why must I kill everything living before me?
    My hands are always covered in blood of the victims I choose. Death harbors inside me it seems...
    My life became pointless the day I was born.
    Or so I'm told.
    Everything is mute now a days, and I'm lost.
    Can anyone help me.....?
    I didn't think so...

    By Mika-Chan
    2002 Oct, 27
     
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    Mika-chan, Oct 28, 2002
  12. Zanza

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    Hey, mika-chan, I just noticed that your poems aren't rhymed [is that right? Rhymed? :sweat:], Sow what are the difference between mine and yours?
     
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    Zanza, Oct 29, 2002
  13. Mika-chan

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    Well, not all poetry rhymes. I guess that I don't really know the difference of our poems, but I could tell you a little later if you'd like? I go to school in a hour...
     
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    Mika-chan, Oct 29, 2002
  14. Mika-chan

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    wow. That's cool.I don't have any poems right now that I can post... maybe later.
     
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    Mika-chan, Oct 29, 2002
  15. Zanza

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    Heh, me neither, but I am sure there will be soon :D
    Maybe like your stile Mika :p
     
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    Zanza, Oct 29, 2002
  16. That guy!

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    Here are some that I wrote a while back... I have another around the house somewhere that was published, which is about Han Solo :p

    The Saga of Himura Kenshin

    He fought for the Ishin Shishi
    In order to bring peace to Japan.
    The Hitokiri Battousai was feared
    Over all the torrents of pain, and showers of blood.
    Kenshin gave up his katana
    In exchange for his Sakaba.
    Repairing for those killed
    In Japan, his task fulfilled.

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    Painful Memories

    A wind blew at Kenshin,
    With the smell of the White Plum Flower.
    It reminded him of the one he loved,
    Who was killed in the Tokugawa’s last hours.
     
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  17. Zanza

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    lol, cool!! :D
    I should make something like that for Sanosuke!! :p
     
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    Zanza, Nov 1, 2002
  18. Mika-chan

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    YUGI
    I feel warmth.
    Not of heat,
    But of love.
    I wake up,
    Opening my eyes,
    To find myself In a room.
    Not of warmth and love,
    But of icey hate.
    I walk about.
    Towards the door,
    Wandering the halls.
    Searching for the
    Warmth and love again.
    Then I come upon it.
    Standing in the hall is a young man, age 19.
    His dirty blond hair moves in the cold breeze.
    I run to him.
    And once again,
    I feel the warmth of love.

    This poem is dedicated to the boyfriend that was taken from me by my parents. Yugi. His real name was David Stephens. And I met him in a chat room for RPing.
     
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    Mika-chan, Nov 7, 2002
  19. Mika-chan

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    WAR: ENDLESS WALTZ

    My hands are covered in blood...
    I've killed again.
    My mind is a confusing pit of thoughts.
    Well, questions anyway.
    Many of them asking 'WHY?'
    I can't answer.
    But I'm the only one WITH the answer.
    I lie.
    To myself...
    To friends...
    To family.
    I take the sword that is impaled into the boy.
    My VICTIM.
    His eyes are open, blurred, BLANK...
    I smile as I walk away.
    But that look still haunts me yet.
    His eyes... just so blank...
    I now vow to not kill.
    Put my sword in reverse.
    Why use a reverse bladed sword you ask?
    For defense is all I'll say.
    This war will repeat...
    Three beats...
    An Endless Waltz.

    11-05-02 By: Mika Makato Mycin.


    I wrote this durring my history class as we were learning of the wars.^^;
     
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    Mika-chan, Nov 9, 2002
  20. keence

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    hey! can I post a poem on this thead?
    I mean Im not the greatest poet but I do have a few that wont kill any body.
     
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    keence, Nov 12, 2002
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