Creative Writing Poems..

Sure thing, would love to read it!

 

off the top of my head heres one

darkness surounds me in my prisen
this place built by the expectations of others
Never will I meet these standards in which they have inprisoned me to.
They see me as they expect me to be not as who I am
thus building my prisen wall.
for eternity will I sit here
For eternity will I be crushed
For eternity in darkness will I wait.....


I know I really isnt very good but I couldnt find my ither poems.
feel free to say what you really think!

 

For all my life
I didn't think about it all
Never thought for myself
Did as I was told
Stupid as it was
All I did was obey
Like some kind of slave
Vice-like grip on my brain
All I did was obey
Til one day
I began to think for myself
Only after then
No one loved me any more
I didn't understand it
No one wanted me any more
Death was a welcome
Everyday that passed
All I do is cry, but
Til I'm loved again
Hell with you all

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Just whipped this up five minutes ago. Easy to find, but look for a little message in it.

 

cool! wow your pretty good.

 

In case anyone didn't see it, the 'hidden message I spoke of was "Find salvation in death". Take the first letter of each line. Here's a nother one.

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Stop all the lies
Understand this
I don't believe you
Can't convince me
I don't need you
Don't wait up for me
Everyone dies in the end
In the end we all see Hell
So I'll just sit back and wait
Righteousness will come my way
In my own sadistic belief
God won't help you then
Hell is my escape
To my paradise I'll go
Everyone dies in the end
On the cross we all burn
Until our ashes blow away
Soon caught up in the winds of change
Never to be heard from again
Evil is what we make of it
So you think I am evil
So I think you are, too

 

I noticed that there was the 'hidden mesages' in them. that's cool. i've never really thought of doing something like that. I can't think of a poem right now, but maybe later.:catgirl:

 

Very nice, Zanza

Here's three I wrote in school today.
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Drifting

Cannot see anything
Reality drifting
Away from me
Waves of black
Little ebony blankets
Inside my soul
Numbing my heart
Growing darker
Inside my mind
Never-ending darkness
That stains my vision
Hindering my sight
Everything is fading
Darkening into nothingness
All alone
Reality's drifting
Killing me slowly
~~
Masochistic Dreams

My eternal pain
Always pleasurable
Stinging in my heart
Open wounds
Calling out to me
Hellish rapture
Inner joy
Soul's escape
Through the pain
Inside my mind
Crying out to me
Drowning joy of
Reality's pain
Eternal release
All my dreams
Masochistic release
Soul's escape
~~
Never Forget

I'm not here at all
All forgotten, by the mass
Mass of eyes
Eyes that see right through me
Though me into emptiness
Emptiness always running
Running no where
No where to go at all
All of your words are lies
Lies like my life
Life that means nothing to you
You forgot me
Forgot me like buried orchids
Orchids of glowing bright red
Red like the blood that's gushing
Gushing from the wounds left open
Open from the pain of that
That in which you tried
Tried to heal everything
Everything I'll never forget
Never forgoet what you've done

 

Thats cool hiding a message in the poem!

 

Heres one that I just wrote, its not very good but I guess it could be called fesible.

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Red
blood red
is all that I see
the ground,red
the sky,red
my hands, red
Red,
driping down my fingers,
seeping into the ground,
discoloring my vision,
oozing from the bodies around me as they lay,
Red is the only color that I see
Red,
the color of hate,
the color of blood,
the color of war,
the color of death.
War, hate,useless blood shed, death
these are what we fight as enimies,
these are our falts,
these arethe solutions we come up with to solve our problems...
when will we learn?
when will our souls be set free?

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yet another...

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EVIL

screaming defience
with my last breath,
bearing my teeth
one last time to fight.
using my last strength
to get ready for one last leap,
one last blow at Evil
to laugh at my last breath in Its face
never even at my last breath will I
give in
Screaming defience till my last breath
leaping for that last blow
At Evil



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Okay well I'm sure some of you know about those little poem-magnet things, if not... here we go... they're just a bunch of magnets with words on 'em and you can put 'em together to make poems and such... I was doing this in class today to pass the time, and there was one with normal words, and one that was mainly Shakespeare-like... here's the three I came up with...

~~~
Some measure here of discontent art envy
through more of winter like fair melancholy
o'er which would never herein beseech you
to question what hadst made him he
with grace & idle loathsome vehemence
you could always then nay seek mischance
ne'er deceive
only torment.

~~~
For he who wantonly strike at thee
with perilous manner
thence sanctify by quench'd mercy
hence how we dream almost nothing
& bestow tempted death
if thy man seemly merry
& haste every wicked woe
therefore vow lest come loathing slander
have envy more of cursed light

~~~
Damn mortal sleep
this dark sky day
see from secret
only open
over empty Earth
bless'd light
remember moment's shadow
tendrils slice through
Winter's dry skin
vanish morning
like wind
I only dream about
hear early gold
and off
with vulgar song of the moon
evening year
and blow, willingly
dark, villainous wind

~~~

And no, none of these have that hidden message I put in the others.

 

I have to get a set of those Ive just never heard of where they sell them. Do you know?

 

niice.

haha, I've never heard of those before. An interesting concept though. They turned out pretty good. erm, since this is a poetry place, I'm going to try my luck here. I wrote this the other day in Histroy class:

No One

In my mind I try
try to envision the sky

endless
fathomless

The cold depths of space
from star to star I trace

In my mind I try
I try to envision why

your face,
ice cold, like space

your eyes are endless
fathomless

hate burns cold
in those bottomless depths

why am I the object of cruelty?
why can't you, why can't you see?

I'm just trying to live my life
I'm not causing any strife

set me free
from this misery
I'm just a person
and when
my life
is done
what have you accomplished?
you're nothing.....you're no one....

CHEH....tell me whatcha think...

p.s Ark, wicked idea with the hidden msgs. kewl.

 

You suck! <--the title

You suck! <--the title
ermm....

Should I have gone to Zanza's???

There is no music playing
but what is this I hear?
The steps of your feet,
when to me you draw near?
Or is it my heart pumping
beating so loud into my ears?
I know I dont love you,
and care for you I dont,
but when you come up to me
those feelings no longer show.
That smile I hate to see each day,
the laughter when to me you play
that smirk and when you say....
those words i dont want to hear.
It makes me mad, makes me fear
we dont have a chance
no such thing as romance
why? because we are best friends.

kinda but not based on real life.

 

NeoB, that's really good. It's sad though. *sniffle* Course, it's not in real life, so all is well ..... well, my mother just told me to get the h3ll off the comp and study... k. bye. EGG SALAD JOB BUDDY

 

-The Holy God Of The Little Men That Hide In The Dark Corners Of The Room With No Light Or Sound That Doesn't Echo Off The Walls That Aren't There In The Darkness As The Light That Never Existed Dissapears!!!

This really isn't a Poem, but I wrote it in an e-mail and like it so I thought I'd share...

 

here is myne

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There once were two cats of kilkenny,
each thought there was one cat too many,
so they fought and they fit,
and they scratched and they bit,
till, exceoting their nails
and the tips of their tails,
instead of two cats, there weren't any.

 

this is my poem (its not that good, but, what the hell ill put it on anyway)

YOUR LOVES A GIFT

I think about you all the time
And wish one day that you'll be mine
Your my only love, thats true
So this poems especially for you.

I am the bee, you are my flower
Your love gives me strength and power
You are the beating of my heart
Without you here, id fall apart

You build a fire, ill guard the flames
You go to live on Mars, ill do the same
You commit a crime, ill take the blame
Ill make it right, so you wont be ashamed

Your like sunshine on a freezing day
Your loves a gift, thats all to say
In a dream, your all i see
I cant describe what you mean to me


note: took me a LONGGG time to write that.