Creative Writing pretty depresing just a warning

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  1. Inuyasha_iscool

    Inuyasha_iscool New Member

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    Familys and Fathers

    Once apon a time there was a girl who had to learn to live in a war zone called her family.
    Her heart was broken by her father.
    He beat her mother and he came home drunk with some slut he met in a bar.
    He left his daughter and moved to ohio were he died in a car acident because he was drunk.
    Now the girl has to learn to live with a guy who has 2 kids from hell and his ex-wife is a phyco who has threatened to kill my mother.
    They broke me.
    I'm now a Teenager.
    I'm crying out from the depths of my soul please no more.
    They hate me and they have broken my nose, arm, elbow, and heart.
    You could never know true pain till your own family hates you.
     
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  2. Mika-chan

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    wow. that is depresing... I can agree though that you won't know the pain untill it's happened to you. But try being banned from you family for who you are.... because yu're Bi and don't seem human. It's sad as to how people fear what they don't know exists. I have been abandoned and abused and I will never forget that... Sorry if I seem really pissed, but I sort of am. Gomen.
     
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  3. keence

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    I think I can understand some of it my own familey hates me. My sister puts me down all the time and my dad ignorsme. Im the misfit of the familey and no body ever notices me.

    out of the depths of my prisen I cry to have my plea fall on deaf ears.
     
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  4. ianslove

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    call upon the woes of me,
    for i am forsaken
    i have left the depths of my own blood
    to plunge headfirst into rivers that belong to another line
    like a black and white image in a neon colage
    i stuck out
    years later, the lines have blurred
    the colors have bled,
    and the differences aren't so obvious
    but still, sometimes, i look & wonder
    what it would be like
    to be loved by my own family


    this is really what my life's about. at 10 yrs. old, i left my mom's house & moved in with my godmother (who i call mom).
     
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  5. Hikaru

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    that is so depressing!

    I think that is so true.

    For all of you who have had these experiences, please know that you have been brave. :) Good job, you guys.
     
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  6. Mika-chan

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    Ahem.... what would you consider 'brave'?
     
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  7. Inuyasha_iscool

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    she probably means that it's hard to talk about stuff like this. It hurts sometimes.
     
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  8. Hikaru

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    that's what I mean.... (thanks inuyasha_iscool)
     
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    you know my family expect me to forgive them for 8 years of physical, mental, and emotional abuse. I'm working on it... but it's a tad bit difficult.
     
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  10. Inuyasha_iscool

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    i'm 13 so 8 years is alot of my life.
     
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  11. Inuyasha_iscool

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    I have to get how I feel out so I figure tell people who don't know me. That wasn't one of my poems I was just wrighting.
    my poems are better have a few that are published in a book
    and a CD-Rom colletion.
     
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  12. Hikaru

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    I'm sorry....:( *hugs inuyasha_iscool* I'm glad you told about it, even though you don't really know us. Consider me your friend, k? Please talk to me if you are having any more problems.
     
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  13. Vegito_luver

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    wow. I come from a broken family. My mom is always depressed and crying all the time. My sis yells at me for even talking to Mom, and is constantly ragging on me for the littlest things.:(
     
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  14. Nephilim_X

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    *hugs*

    You will, in time, find happiness. No matter how unlikely it seems.

    *hugs*

    We're here for ya.
     
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  15. Inuyasha_iscool

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    luv the sig sarah! lol
     
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  16. Inuyasha_iscool

    Inuyasha_iscool New Member

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    but there is a song called fighter. it pretty much discribes me and one called I'm okay only covers the dad beating the mom thing but it discribes my life to a certin extent.
     
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  17. Vegito_luver

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    geez shut up about the sig (inu)!
     
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  18. Inuyasha_iscool

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    geez sarah don't get hostile it was a compliment.
     
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  19. Nephilim_X

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    I don't think she meant it to come across as hostile... I think she's embarresed...
     
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  20. Inuyasha_iscool

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    with sarah it was ment as sarcastic or hostile.
     
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