Creative Writing Random .9

Discussion in 'Written Arts' started by Chance, Jun 8, 2006.

  1. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    I lay here unclean.

    Untouched yet ravaged.

    Betrayed within the covers of our life.

    Bathed in obsession.

    Torn in two by indecision.

    Pressed to close to destruction.

    Wanting to touch salvation.

    Forgeting I have to be patient.

    Maybe I'll make it.

    Touch me.

    Wrap me in serenity.

    Promise me eternity.

    Call it obscurity.

    Prove your worth to me.

    I came, I saw, I believe.

    Marry me.

    Carry me to hospitality.

    Bury me in possibility.

    Rape me with fatality.



    Make me whole.

    Make me cry.

    Make me simple.

    End my life.
     
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  2. Lance Leingod

    Lance Leingod The White Blade

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    I think it was good, I like it. What did you think about when you made this? I thought it was about someone wanting someone else.
     
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  3. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    Lately when I write, I write to the rhythm of the song I'm listening to. Like, if it goes with the beat, I just go with it and let it flow. If you seem me writing long poetry with alot of detail, I'm listening to Coheed. If they're short like this, I'm listening to stuff like MCST. =)
     
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  4. Lance Leingod

    Lance Leingod The White Blade

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    Nice way to make peoms :D
     
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