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  1. LovelyLady

    LovelyLady New Member

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    Wow! Very good poems, you guys! *clap* Anyways...

    This is a poem that I wrote for my English class about my mom when she was at the hospital during Christmas 2 years ago. Tell me what you think.

    FROM THE DEAD

    That Monday,
    She Died.

    My Tears Were
    Like Waterfalls.

    The Next Day,
    She Rose.

    My Tears Were
    Full Of Joy.

    That Saturday,
    I Saw Her.

    Lying In Her Tomb,
    With A Dead
    Look In Her Face.

    Once Again,
    I Bawled
    Like A Baby.

    Her Body Has
    Changed
    Into A Zombie.

    Stones Have
    Replaced
    Her Eyes.

    Her Breath
    Was Taken
    By Death.

    The Room
    Was Not
    A Room...

    The Room
    Has Turned
    Into A Grave..
     
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  2. Shadowstalker

    Shadowstalker New Member

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    i wrote this one a couple days ago...you guys can tell me what ya think.

    ~The Empty Roof Top~

    Sitting on my roof top
    With the roads clear
    Sprinklers are running
    Just like my tears

    Sitting on my roof top
    Waiting with the stars
    All alone
    Dreaming to be in your arms

    Sitting on my roof top
    Morning to night
    Summer to winter
    January to December

    Sitting on my roof top
    Waiting for you
    Dying with every second
    Of my life

    You are my life
    Just in case you think of me
    You will know where to go
    I will be apon my roof top
    Holding my knife

    Dead or alive
    I will love you
    But becareful when you climb up to see me
    You might slip and fall
    For my blood has ran down my soul-less roof top

    From my wrists
    You will see
    Slits of love in them
    From my suffering...


    well, thats it. its kinda long but oh well. enjoy^^
     
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  3. Shadowstalker

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    i found another one i wrote when i was 9 or around that age...here it is!

    My sister is the Devil I swear
    She has the horns so beware
    one day she will get out
    then run all about
    Screaming, "I am the devil sister!"


    dont ask me how i came up with that one but hey...i think weird:D
     
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  4. ~ Zack ~

    ~ Zack ~ Guest

    August

    Here I am, yes here I am
    And I'm sitting all alone
    All alone with no one there
    No one there with me
    And all I can think about is her
    About her and every little thing
    Every little thing she says and thinks
    And every little way she looks
    And every little way I lost every little thing
    Every little thing that she does

    And it's the first time I saw it snow in August
    First time I realized I can't make it through this
    And it's growing cold here in August
    'cause my sunshine can't light up my day

    Think back to the days we used to have
    The days we used to laugh
    We'd laugh at each other's jokes
    And joke how we'd grow up and get married
    And we'd live so happily ever after
    But ever after it was only just a joke
    Because I had to go and change my mind
    My mind that didn't know what it was doing
    For what it was doing was the biggest mistake
    A mistake that I learned soon enough
    Learned to regret

    And here it is, snowing here in August
    And she's not here to melt it all away
    So I'll just lie here in the snow in August
    And freeze until she takes me back

    Now I don't know what to do
    Doing everything I can to make up
    Make up for how I ****ed up
    ****ed up everything I had
    'cause I had her and that's all I need
    I need her now when it's too late
    Too late for me to do anything
    Someone else beat me to the punch
    Like a punch in the face
    And it's her pretty face that I can't face
    So I'll just turn my back
    'cause I know she'll never take me back

    And the snow's weighing me down in August
    I can feel it getting heavier as it drags me down
    And it's never been this cold before in August
    And I just realized I can't make it through this
     
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  5. Raven

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    the Hesitation

    The saltiness overwhelms me
    I am left with a brackish residue in my mouth

    the sand scratches my burnt lips
    its graininess chafes insistently

    the constant humidity labours my breathing
    i am lost in a melange of sensations

    saltygraindamp

    infilrating my body

    saltygraindamp

    overpowering my thoughts

    the pungent heat intimidates me

    yet, i experiance a joyous reluctance
    as i am pulled deeper into the ocean.
     
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  6. Raven

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    Spiral Stair

    Walking down the river bed
    things going through my wandering head
    A thought of spirals came to mind
    from celtic beliefs many left behind

    The wise lady of the ways of seeing
    told me how to search for my being
    But how do I travel from here to there
    replied did she, through the spiral stair
     
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  7. Novus

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    I see a lot of deep, emotional stuff here, so I'll mix it up with some utter gibberish.

    "I Hate Math" (written while reading a calculus book)

    Add, subtract or multiply
    I divide and hope to die
    Exponent laws and square roots
    Get a gun so I can shoot
    Algebra and calculus
    Don't like them, they don't like us
    Take this damn arithmetic
    **** like this just makes me sick

    Sin, cos, tan and logarithms
    Always throwing off my rhythm
    Geometry of a circle
    Seeing red, I'm blue, like purple
    Congruent or similar
    Triangles aren't where we are
    Area or perimeter
    I'm a mathematics hater

    All this trigonometry
    Is starting to get to me
    Functions and relations suck
    Angle theorem, out of luck
    Not down with Pythagoras
    Can't believe I ever was
    All this talk of x-y planes
    It's making me go insane

    All this talk and rambling on
    Now my taste for math is gone
    One thing left to say at last:
    Certify it, I hate math!


    And then, there's this.

    "March of the Ogre King"
    As the sky bleeds red
    Angel's tears falling on your head
    Bringing to mind the things that have been said
    You were forewarned, the time is near
    To spread darkness, death and fear
    When all hope and light disappear

    See him marching on
    In his hands a crimson blade
    Stained by battles long gone
    And it's never going to fade

    When you meet, angers rise
    Feel the burning in his eyes
    Enmity never dies
    And the blade that he swings
    Like a hornet how he stings
    As the world fades to black he sings

    See him marching on
    In his hands a crimson blade
    Stained by battles long gone
    And it's never going to fade

    With a roar he attacks
    Stopping you dead in your tracks
    Raging fire and hell take the shape of an axe
    His strike puts your soul to the test
    He plunges deep into your chest
    Where his anger can rest

    See him marching on
    In his hands a crimson blade
    Stained by battles long gone
    And it's never going to fade

    Raised high again, he gives a shout
    With another yell, it swings about
    As he hits, a sick'ning snap, now there is no doubt
    As your blood stains earth below
    Running ankle-deep, covers like snow
    But on and on he goes

    See him still marching on
    In his hands a crimson blade
    Stained fresh by a foe now gone
    And your blood will never fade


    I hate the rhythm on that one, but I think it's fun anyway.
     
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  8. Naeo

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    Lies

    i never got to apologize
    for the things i said and did
    i wish that i could tell him now
    but his time wore quite thin

    i never got to tell him
    before he had to leave
    i never got to tell him
    before i had to grieve

    i hope he will forgive me
    as i hope he hears my cries
    how could this have happened?
    i shrouded him in lies

    at times i feel him close to me
    as though he heard my words
    then he disappears again
    quiet as the birds

    his face feels cold
    as the water flows over
    he stares into the sky
    eys open
    lifeless
    shrouded in my lies

    nothing could be worse
    than seeing him dead
    his mother held me
    as i hung my head

    my tears fall to the floor
    before me he lies
    cold and lifeless
    shrouded in lies

    i made this poem for Matt. he died, and i never got to tell him my secret. he died last year, June 28, 2002. i love you Matt.
     
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  9. Naeo

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    His blood whisps in my face as he dies
    no one cares, niether do i
    on my lips lies a simple regret
    hush now my darling, be still, don't fret

    your blue eyes mean nothing to me
    i'll kill you right now
    if you promise to bleed

    let it flow like rivers
    run like time
    crimison tears
    bloody, red lines

    die you bast*rd
    i'll kill you, don't plead
    die, i hate you
    blead, just blead...

    i was a bit mad when i wrote this... heh heh heh...
     
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  10. Naeo

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    Hiei

    i lie on the cold floor
    as Hiei appears in my arms
    the Jagan glows bright
    as it shadows my face

    he feels so warm
    his cape against my face
    he holds me tightly
    as the Jagan grows dark

    now it's just me
    lieing on the floor
    all alone
    just me, and his core

    and, YES! i am obsessed with Hiei.
     
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  11. Aya_Mikage

    Aya_Mikage Guest

    two poems by me :)

    When you feel abandoned and alone, with the unique company of your life’s ruins
    Raise your eyes towards the sky
    And you’ll feel the warmth of my hug,
    That true love I want it to run through your veins,
    My hand twine with yours
    And my finger will wipe away the tear that’s descending along your cheek,
    Now and forever.


    the other:

    I still remember the taste of your kisses,
    How I heard clearly the beat of your heart when we were so close,
    Your breath on my neck,
    Your smile so warm,
    Your touch on my skin…
    And sometimes, for a single moment,
    I think it has been only a dream
    I think you never left,
    But when I open my weeping eyes, the cruel reality falls down on me
    Destroying my childish illusion, leaving me in a sea of sorrow and pain,
    Leaving anything but the little flame of my hope.
    And I know I will never let you go,
    I’ll fight away all the obstruction and fears,
    I’ll win every deceiving temptation,
    Only to return to our paradise

    do u like?^^
     
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  12. Naeo

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    no, i don't like...I LOVE!!! but i woud have to say that the second poem is my favorite...ummm...what did you think of..uh...mine?
     
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  13. Aya_Mikage

    Aya_Mikage Guest

    in which page is yours?tell me and i'll read and review^^
     
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  14. Aya_Mikage

    Aya_Mikage Guest

    i've read!!!I particulary love "Lies"...it's so full of emotions ** and you're style is great ^____^
    compliments!!!!!
     
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  15. Naeo

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    YAY! *bows quite a few times* thank you! 'Lies' was inspired by my friend's death. but THANK YOU!!! *beams* hehehe! the one about Hiei definitly wasn't my best work, but i have one about Kurama. i don't really like him, but i made it for a friend. i'm a bit sceptical about posting it though. i don't know how i came apon my style...it just happened! i don't like it when every line rhymes with the other. that's always botherd me.
     
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  16. ~ Zack ~

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    A little Heather-inspired (Silent Hill 3) poem

    ~~~~~~~~~

    I lost everything
    You took it all away
    There's nothing for me
    Nothing here now
    You left me damn near emotionless
    But I can't feel any happiness now
    And no sorrow, because of you
    All it is is anger
    Resentment, hatred
    All I want is revenge
    Why, why'd you have to do this?
    Because of who I am?
    Would it have worked out differently
    If I were someone different?
    What if I don't want to be this person?
    What if I don't want to be
    What you say I'm supposed to be
    You make me so confused
    And I don't know what to do
    And all I can do
    Is hate you
     
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  17. Naeo

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    wow! i like that Zack! very nice! i wrote one like that, only it's really bloody. it's on the previous page.
     
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