Creative Writing She.

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  1. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    She walks my dreams, Such heavenly steps to make.
    Her skin the sins my heart seems to fake,
    While love is all we are fit to make.

    Upon sheets of satin, or floors of dirt,
    I prove to her all she's worth,
    And her cries only further my willingness to hurt.

    I can bruise her, and break her;
    And all the while she's the faker,
    Crying out how far I take her.

    Yet in the darkness is the real me.
    The penacle of my honest being,
    Crazy, and honestly frightening.

    I shine but only with her around.
    I succeed but only to hit the ground,
    Broken when she's out of town.

    Stumbling drunk when she's angry,
    Telling me she'd love to hang me.
    This is just how lovely she can be.

    All over me to do better.
    Fix everything, from her mood to the weather.
    She thinks my hide is made of leather.

    Leaving marks all over my pride,
    Ripping apart my insides as I die alittle each time.
    See, it's not like I want to hide.

    I'm just venting, complaining.
    Feening, and debating,
    Almost always complicating!

    Yeah, this is me starring in my own rant.
    This is me continuing to say, "Hun, I can't."

    This is me and this is us and this..
    THIS!


    This is nothing.
     
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  2. Lance Leingod

    Lance Leingod The White Blade

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    Sad once more T_T

    I like the saying "I succeed but only to hit the ground". It makes me remember of something I read once from Rurouni Kenshin. It was where Shishio tells Kenshin that even the towering name Battousai must fall back down to Earth. I like that part :p
     
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  3. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    An RK reference? Amazing.
     
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  4. Lance Leingod

    Lance Leingod The White Blade

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    What's amazing? I have a really good memory when people talk about Rurouni Kenshin :p
     
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    Well, memory is something that's needed. xD And I meant amazing that it came up almost randomly. =D Thanks for it though. Love=RK
     
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