Creative Writing Song.

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  1. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    [ Was watching American Pop and wanted to write a poem like the old school rock. >.>; Here is my sad attempt. XD ]

    They call me the believer, my thoughts all scattered here.
    Coming up with an idea, initiative, has never been so clear.
    My eyes are on the prize though, I can see the light.
    Through the darkest of hours, I still put up a fight.

    I can say I know what you’re thinking where tomorrow is do or die.
    I don’t want to ask questions, I’d rather wonder why.
    The people here all are staring, taking in all this jive.
    Know you’ve got something coming, in the end it’s alright.

    Tell me I’m crazy.
    Tell me I can’t say the words.
    Tell me I’m crazy.
    It couldn’t be more absurd.
    Tell me I’m crazy.
    I’ll prove all you fools wrong.
    Tell me I’m crazy.
    Just shut up and listen to the song.

    They call me a deceiver, my words flowing with my gift.
    Can’t say it’s really perfect, but then again, what is?
    Yet they try to keep me down, cut me off in my prime.
    Call all my words garbage, say I can’t bust a rhyme.

    So the answers seem to flood us, causing caution lights to flare up.
    Possibilities so a sequel, maybe this really isn’t enough.
    With the matches that spark a nation, I’m rising to my title.
    My lyrics, limericks and poetry express just the right style.

    Tell me I’m crazy.
    Tell me I‘m impossibly hurt.
    Tell me I’m crazy.
    It couldn’t be more absurd.
    Tell me I’m crazy.
    I’m not sure why we all can‘t just get along.
    Tell me I’m crazy.
    Just shut up and listen to the song.
     
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  2. Lance Leingod

    Lance Leingod The White Blade

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    I thought it was rather good :D. At first I didn't know what American Pop would sound like until I asked my mom :p :sweat: then I had a little bit of what it could have been. But still, good song :D
     
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    American Pop is an animated movie that is to American pop music as Heavy Metal was to the changing metal scene of the early 80's. A good film if you ever get the chance to see it.
     
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