Creative Writing Starry Eyes

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  1. Hiro

    Hiro Active Member

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    It was when we first met...
    Those eyes burned me like the Sun
    they werent the windows to your soul
    they were the very essence of your soul

    Those starry eyes burned into my mind
    I couldnt sleep
    They hit me hard... hard as a truck
    what was it
    in those eyes?
    that gave me this feeling
    I long to live with that feeling
    if only you'd be mine
    I'd be blessed with those Starry Eyes....
     
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  2. Peachy

    Peachy ☆liberal HMod☮

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    sweet........
     
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  3. Lance Leingod

    Lance Leingod The White Blade

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    Good poem :D
     
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  4. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    <3 Nice. Very nice.
     
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