Creative Writing Taken down.

Discussion in 'Written Arts' started by Chance, Jul 2, 2006.

  1. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    You've got me in a choke hold,
    No chance of letting go.

    And I'm gasping for air
    As you watch me; You don't care.

    Keep me face down in the dirt,
    Guess I know what I'm worth.

    Pushing mud from my lips,
    Still gasping air in sips.

    It's like you don't know when to quit.
    I don't know what to do with this.

    Some information is too much,
    I know when I've had enough.

    Sick and pitiful and bruised I lay
    With my eyes clouded from the pain.

    Going numb, my vision blurred.
    Never knew this kind of hurt.

    Taken down, you're on top.
    The hero here, and you won't stop.

    Belittle me and call me names,
    Make me succumb to your mind games.

    God this is funny, ironic even.
    You were someone I chose to believe in.

    Now I'm under all this grief,
    I can't move, I can't speak.

    And all you do is push down harder,
    Making sure to destroy me farther.
     
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  2. Lance Leingod

    Lance Leingod The White Blade

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    That's just really sad to me T_T
     
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