Creative Writing Teenage Poem.

Ya' know? I always write serious....deep..sad poems all the time. For once, I want to write a weird preteen poem to make people laugh so hard at the stupidity that they actually feel better and take it to heart. Hope you like it -- It was inspired by Clint Eastwood - Gorillaz


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I'm happy, feelin' glad
spent a few weeks in rehab
I feel bad, I already relapsed
This is the most fun i've ever had

My mom's been putting me down
You won't see my eyes on the ground
You people won't ever see a frown
On the face of this class clown

I'm being thankful for what I do have
Though, I barely have a mom or dad
I couldn't explain some of the pain i've had
But you'll never see me break-down and get sad

Sunshine is really hard to find
when you get yourself down all the time
You won't see me with emo poetry ryhmes
I've got no slashed wrists to hide

I'm happy, feelin' just great
My heart is really filled with hate
but i'm looking at you with a straight face
Because life is so much easier that way

 

lol i lol i like it, its very original..keep up the good work.

 

Different but good. Little ruff at times but it turned out nice.

 

I agree with Basher. It was a little weird on some parts but otherwise a good poem ^_^

Keeping writing ^_^