Creative Writing The break up.

[This is the letter of one to another; A break up not that touched me so deeply, I didn't think it possible. It was raw ans it showed how hurt the person was. I don't know but with permission I share this with you.]

The space that came between you and a love that you could hardly fathom was just large
enough for a single lie. The forgiveness that hovered just over that space was
total,irrevocable, and retained the price of simple truth. I can't seem to figure out why
you, claiming that you cared for me, refused to answer a single question with the truth. Is
the world that you have created inside your head really worth sacrificing what could have
been a relationship that might have surpassed anything that you have had to date? I'm
destroyed by the fact that you only looked on me as another girl to use in your quest to
perfect this farcical dream world that you live in. I refuse to believe that you really knew
me. I simply can't imagine that anything you could have conjured up in your head can stand
on comprable ground as me. I still can't explain why you do what you do. Your grip on
reality extends only as far as your insatiable lusts and desires. Yet even the momentary
feelings of emotion and fulfillment can't really make you happy. As long as you continue to
chose fictional whimsy over factual worth, you will never come close to the bliss you
believe that you have. It pains me even more to know beyond a shadow of any doubt that deep
down inside you, under the lies, past the safety mechanisms, and beyond the enormous walls
you have built, lives a living and wonderful man with the capacity to not only live or
endure life, but to relish and bask in the real happiness that only absolute truth can
bring. Yet beyond all these things lies the crux of my inability to let you fade from
memory: You know what you did to me was wrong, deep down you regret it, but still you
stubbornly throw my grace and patience with you away without even slightly considering the
pains and turmoil that I went through to offer them. I cannot and will not offer them to you
again. The space that was once as small as a lie is now further than can be measured by any
human means.

 

I don't know what to say. I'm just shocked by it. Who ever dumbed her was a jerk. I, for one, wouldn't do that to anyone what that guy did to her. I hope she's okay now.

 

Wow... slug him ^^ Anyway back to the point. Awesome as always. you really got a way with words.