Creative Writing We're done

Discussion in 'Written Arts' started by Peachy, Jun 30, 2006.

  1. Peachy

    Peachy ☆liberal HMod☮

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    Well I wrote this poem, while crying at my computer..It kinda sucks, honestly. I've had extreme writer's block lately..;_; i'm so sad.

    Look me in the eyes
    tell me the truth this time
    I promise, for now I won't cry

    The lies...

    I'm sick of lying in bed every night
    wondering if your thinking about me
    Even after we get in a fight

    The anger..

    Every love song gets me depressed
    I don't know what your really thinking
    Now's the time to confess

    Confess to me..

    Do you really feel the same way?
    That one thought runs through my head
    Each and every single day..

    It hurts..

    I'm about to go away for awhile
    I don't want to be sad this whole time
    While i'm at home I just want to smile..

    Let me smile..

    Tell me what you really feel
    before they handcuff me and send me off
    So i'll have a little time to heal

    please..

    Please, I really need to know
    If you don't care any more..
    Now's the time to go..

    We're done..
     
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  2. Lance Leingod

    Lance Leingod The White Blade

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    .............................................I don't know what to say. Its a really good poem that's really emotional to me. I hope things turn out okay in the end.
     
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  3. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    Yeah Peachy, this is one of those throw togethers. You're right, Writers block sucks but it's not that bad. ^^ Not your best but nowhere near your worse.
     
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