Creative Writing 2 for one.

Passion.

Burning, like a phoenix in the night with a tail of fire that spreads it's blinding light.

Calling, like the storm howls near dusk and the winds blow and the sun is nowhere in sight.

Challenging, like a contender for the top prize, fighting tooth and nail to get out and play.

Yeah, I'm out to play..

Whispering, like a lover in my ear, making me want to touch you, hoping just to feel..

Devouring, Like a plague that sweeps over my body and takes complete control.

Judging, like the stern face of the judge I stand before now, my lips aquiver and my heart beating still.

Yeah, I'm out of my cage, you can't control me.

It's a burst of passion that burns me now, cinders left wherever I am found, and in deep thought I ask what I expect you already wonder, was it worth it?

Yes, to have each other..It was.

It is.

So here is my passion, my perfect replica of happiness, was all pent up and now is springing out of my body with a precision.

Tell me if this love is all we know?

Do we know more then we let on?

Hell, if this is it, I want no more. You're all I need, the feeling of peace flowing, the actions you know I'm knowing, catching on to how you are and that is all I know now.

Conspiring, stalking, obsessing.

If you love me, keep up the obsession.

It fuels my passion.


Changing.

As you feel this quivering,

A passing of similar remorse

And a pained cry of disillusionment,

The torment of something worse.

With honesty making you worthless,

And fear making you shake,

The actions of the masses

Bring you close enough to break.

Yet in this downward spiral,

You're nothing more then a shell.

A piece of the old you,

The one I knew well.

 

If you ask me which one is my favorite, I'm saying both because they're both very good. I like them

 

Hehe, I'd have to say Lance, you're my biggest fan. I love your stuff as well. =P

 

Thanks, lucky