Creative Writing A Fairy Tale: The Nine Gates

Discussion in 'Written Arts' started by ~ Zack ~, Jul 21, 2003.

  1. ~ Zack ~

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    Bashing time. Feel free to tell me what you think and how much this new story of mine sucks. Be forewarned, still has yet to be edited, so might be a lot of typos and grammatical errors and the likes.
     

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  2. femme_fatale

    femme_fatale New Member

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    I don't think it sucks at all! Your writing is kind of poetic in the way that it flows, but not flowery -- very good descriptions and use of words! I liked the names too (Agony seems like a fitting name, considering how much horror the poor kid's going through). It starts off like a rustic fantasy, but by the end, not only do the characters change appearances, but it seems like it's going to branch off into a hearty adventure story.

    Very good, post more if you have it!
     
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  3. Zanza

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    hmm, I didn't read it all yet, but I can say, I can't wait to it being animated!!! :D
    It started out good, so I can say its pretty cool!! I'll let you know when I finish it :)
     
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