Creative Writing A Metroid Fan-Fic

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  1. Karmi

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    Thisis copyrighted so you could be uber in trouble if you copied this. Hopefully the story for the Next Metroid Game. Please read and commet on it. Ask questions ect. Thanks! ^-^! Enjoy!



    The Zagan Parasites

    After the famous Samus Aran escaped from the horrible ship, the B.S.I station where the X parasites were infesting, she returned to HQ to take a break from all the mess that was wondering around in the galaxy. As she went to her boss, Validsate Ferzanc II, he told her that while she was encountering the X, they had found a knew organism unknown to most all of the Galaxy. "The Federal Counsel of 12599 has insisted on someone to investigate the situation. said Validsate. We don't know what kind of power these life forms posses, so we've decided that we shall send our best Bounty Hunter to investigate. You're record is excellent ,although some may not know you're identity, you have proven you're self to us. We shall send you with our best materials and up grade you're suit with the latest technology and equip you with our best weapons. You shall leave immediately to investigate. That is all."
    Samus saluted and left the room. She walked to the technology rooms where she got her suit upgraded and new weapons equipped. She left in a knew ship which had been named Polaris 7. She tuned in the directions on her Galactic Navigator to locate the planets location. It was called Fequel. She headed her ship in it's direction. While she was nearing it, HQ scientist Balmz called her ship. "After much research we have discovered a few facts about this new alien life form. "We have named it Zagan after the rings of Galadora. It's name is associated with it's characteristics. You see, the rings of Galadora were formed by DNA of different life forms. It was able to absorb some of the X parasites qualities by the radiation that the planets atmospheric layers provided. This allowed it to absorb DNA directly from any life form through it's carbon dioxide. First, the pollutants in the air around the planet absorbed the planets radiation. Then, the life forms around the planet inhaled these toxic gases. Getting into the air bags in there lungs, the radiation burned the lungs cell wall allowing small bits of blood to seep through.
    The gases absorbed the DNA and they exhaled it out into the air, allowing the planets radiation to absorb the DNA forming various rings around the planet within years. This means that the parasites our made of X, Metroid, and other harmful organisms. The parasites formed out of radiation that bonded with other organisms that had adapted to live on the planet. They bred and colonized the planet until there population was enormous. The Galactic Federation found out about this strange planet and attacked. Having no clue that the organisms lived there, they destroyed the planet and their mission was accomplished. However, the Zagan were quite intelligent and started to colonize on Fequel. This planet being much closer to us we found out and studied them. The way we determined they traveled is with some sort of galactic energy. We our not quite sure what it was, but we hopefully will find out soon. Be careful Samus."

    Samus saluted and left the room. She walked to the technology rooms where she got her suit upgraded and new weapons equipped. She left in a knew ship which had been named Polaris 7. She tuned in the directions on her Galactic Navigator to locate the planets location. It was called Fequel. She headed her ship in it's direction. While she was nearing it, HQ scientist Balmz called her ship. "After much research we have discovered a few facts about this new alien life form. "We have named it Zagan after the rings of Galadora. It's name is associated with it's characteristics. You see, the rings of Galadora were formed by DNA of different life forms. It was able to absorb some of the X parasites qualities by the radiation that the planets atmospheric layers provided. This allowed it to absorb DNA directly from any life form through it's carbon dioxide. First, the pollutants in the air around the planet absorbed the planets radiation. Then, the life forms around the planet inhaled these toxic gases. Getting into the air bags in there lungs, the radiation burned the lungs cell wall allowing small bits of blood to seep through.
    The gases absorbed the DNA and they exhaled it out into the air, allowing the planets radiation to absorb the DNA forming various rings around the planet within years. This means that the parasites our made of X, Metroid, and other harmful organisms. The parasites formed out of radiation that bonded with other organisms that had adapted to live on the planet. They bred and colonized the planet until there population was enormous. The Galactic Federation found out about this strange planet and attacked. Having no clue that the organisms lived there, they destroyed the planet and their mission was accomplished. However, the Zagan were quite intelligent and started to colonize on Fequel. This planet being much closer to us we found out and studied them. The way we determined they traveled is with some sort of galactic energy. We our not quite sure what it was, but we hopefully will find out soon. Be careful Samus."

    The gases absorbed the DNA and they exhaled it out into the air, allowing the planets radiation to absorb the DNA forming various rings around the planet within years. This means that the parasites our made of X, Metroid, and other harmful organisms. The parasites formed out of radiation that bonded with other organisms that had adapted to live on the planet. They bred and colonized the planet until there population was enormous. The Galactic Federation found out about this strange planet and attacked. Having no clue that the organisms lived there, they destroyed the planet and their mission was accomplished. However, the Zagan were quite intelligent and started to colonize on Fequel. This planet being much closer to us we found out and studied them. The way we determined they traveled is with some sort of galactic energy. We our not quite sure what it was, but we hopefully will find out soon. Be careful Samus."

    Recruits

    Back at HQ the computers that had been tracking Polaris 7 were being operated. Plans for rescue teams were being set but they couldn't just send regular marines. They would have to find people that could match the skills of Samus Aran herself. First, Validsate and his council decided that they would get each federations best bounty hunter and send them on a ship to Fequel. There were three federations: First, there is the Terrian Federation ,where Samus is from. Then there is the Ledsferdin Federation. Colk Hart Federation. They would retrieve the best bounty hunter of each federation and have a meeting on the Barmimi Main Federation. "Ships will be sent immediately to retrieve these bounty hunters" Ordered Validsate. "We shall first retrieve a hunter from the nearest federation. The Ledsferdin Federation. Otherwise I will be sending for our second best bounty hunter, Kenro Bailey."
    The men at HQ fueled up there carrier ship and headed to the Lesferdin Federation. Once they were there, they landed there ship and asked for Captain Seldora. Seldora was the head of the Lesferdin Federation and head of the Psychic Deck in the Barmimi Main Federation. Captain Seldora was an alien from the nearing planet Resdoyaq. These aliens had many psychic powers. They held arm length scepters which would have a large jewel at the end depending on their ranking. They could call upon it at any time and could blast energy like bullets from the jeweled end of them.

    The messengers had called him on the intercom in his private quarters, and he was now coming through the entrance hall. He signaled the pilots over and they sat in the counseling room. "Captain Seldora." greeted Danilie Usadu, head of the marine group. "We have come to ask a favor of you. We have discovered a knew kind of organism roaming on the planet Fequel. We call it Zagan. We know how it was created so we've sent Miss Aran, our best and the most well known bounty hunter, to investigate. Our computers told us that her ship ,the Polaris 7, has crashed landed and is out of power not allowing her to escape. We wanted to send rescue teams but we believe that the creatures are much to powerful for regular marines. As a federation, Captain Validsate of the Terrian Federation has asked you to aid us. We will need you're most precious and densest bounty hunter. Are you willing to except the answer to save the galaxy?" asked Danilie. "Danilie." said Captain Seldora. "This is a big risk, but for the galaxy, it shall do. I will give you my best warrior for this expedition. His name is Lancilian Hecavp. He is a strong warrior and the best bounty hunter of our species. Even though he is very young, do not judge him by his looks. I will contact Captain Validsate and ask his scientists to explain more about the specimen. Otherwise I will call him, give me a moment. the captain closed his eyes and called into the brain of Lancilian: <Lancilian, come directly to the counseling room at once. We've got a mission for you.> After a few minutes, the door opened and a young boy walked in. He had short blue hair, a mini arm length cape, and arm length scepter with a green jewel at the end of it. He had shoulder armor, chest armor and had a strange signal on his forehead.
     
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    Sorry Karmi :)

    This is for the Fiction/Writing Section.

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    "You needed me Captain Seldora." said Lancilian.
    "Lancilian, this mission is more serious then you think. the greatest bounty hunter in the galaxy, Samus Aran, has been trapped on Fequel. A new kind of parasite has formed and it is much more powerful that the metroid or the X. Explained Seldora. It has more than the power of shape shifting, and we do not know it's weakness. You must go with these men to the Terrian Federation. There, the properties of this parasite will be explained. They call it Zagan. Now, I in trust in you the courage of Lesferdian Federation. The galaxy depends on you." Lancilian nodded slightly and he left through the door with Danilie. "May god protect him" wished Captain Seldora. "And all of us."

    Danilie contacted the Terrian Federation and told them that the first bounty hunter had been recruited. They dropped Lancilian off at the Terrian Federation. And headed straight for the Colk Hart Federation. When they got to the next federation Danilie ordered a refueling as he headed for this federations Captain, Captain DarkHart. He asked the guards if he could speak with the captain. They grunted and opened the door, closing it after Danilie entered. He headed up the corridor and came to a room marked Visitors. He walked in and saw the captain. He had greasy black hair which hung down to his shoulders, a long black cape, black boots, a purple t-shirt. He had two millennium blasters at his hands and a belt filled with smoke bombs. "Welcome Danilie." the man said in a low threatening voice. This federation was very violent and loved bloodshed. Unlike the other federations, this federations warriors are trained to commit suicide if ordered. <This is a very dangerous federation, thought Danilie so I better watch what I say to Captain DarkHart.> "Hello Captain DarkHart," said Danilie
    "Why have you come here?" asked Captain DarkHart.
    "I have come to inform you that we have found a knew life form called Zagan. We sent the best bounty hunter in the galaxy, Samus Aran to investigate. But her ship, the Polaris 7 model 69 has crashed on Fequel, where the organism are living. We were wondering if we could borrow you're best bounty hunter to help us exterminate of this species and save the gal......."
    "Well for one, " said Captain DarkHart " Samus Aran must not be a very good hunter because one of my men could've probably could of exterminated half of the species by now. And for two, why should we help when we can survive on our own."
    "Sir, I assure you that you couldn't even exterminate this organism. For all we know, the parasites could have the DNA of people that have died in the last men that died awhile back.” Lancilian said surely.





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