Creative Writing A Poem For Them

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  1. Peachy

    Peachy ☆liberal HMod☮

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    Lately i've wrote alot of poems like this.. i dont think its emo. I just think its the truth and my feelings. For the people who are mentaully/physically/sexually or neglected by their parents. this is for you

    Teenage daughter don't cry
    Close your eyes.. and fly
    don't let her bring you down
    pick yourself off the ground
    smile to yourself and dream
    it won't be as bad as it seems
    your life may come to this hault
    it'll never be your fault
    dont be miserable as well
    let HER burn in hell
    clench your fists, and stay strong
    shes the one thats wrong
    theres alot of weight on your shoulders
    and it'll just get heavier as you get older
    look at the other innocent who loved life
    forced into teenage suicide
    from being pushed down on the floor
    untill they couldn't take it any more
    please never do this
    i know your sick of it
    this for those who are abused
    the ones lonely and confused
    for those who don't know what to do
    this poem is for you
     
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  2. Seishin

    Seishin Guest

    Ummm, interesting choice of words, I'll give you that :D

    In all honesty though, I don't think that telling someone to think of the abuser to burn in hell very appropiate to someone that's been through a lot. But that's just me!

    Great job nonetheless!

    -Seishin
     
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