Creative Writing A Question of Vengeance

I need vollunteers, please, to read one of my works, "A Question of Vengeance". I ask for vollunteers because it's really long. Something like 33 pages, and I know a lot of you probably have better things to do with your time than read amateur novellas (like write them ).
Anyway, it's a fantasy/action piece, and I need readers to give me opinions on what I should do with it. It was originally intended to be MUCH longer, but I had to cut it short due to a deadline. What I need to know is whether I should write the extended version, to the length I originally intended, write a sequel (which is what one of my friends and my sister told me to do) or to just shelf the thing and give it up.
If you're interested, let me know and I'll email it to you.

 

Sure, I'll take a look at it. Just send it my way. l1ghtbr1nger@lycos.com and I'll get back to you whenever I can about it (since it's the weekend now probably sooner than usual).

 

I'd love to check it out. Toss it over to dherder222@hotmail.com . I'll be looking forward to it.

 

Alright, I sent it to you both earlier today. I hope MS Word is an okay program for you. Thank you.

 

Unfortunately, Novus, something about the file didn't react too well with my computer. Could you try sending it in another format like .txt? That's pretty much the universal format, so maybe that'll work better.

 

I'm going to have to fiddle with the formatting a bit before I send it out in .txt form. I just did a copy-and-paste from the original, and it looks like garbage. I'll hopefully get it out tonight.

 

I will have a look at your story. Send it to silver_raven88@hotmail.com

 

I know it's off topic, but just a warning...

Be _VERY, VERY_ careful about posting your e-mails on the forums. Remember these forums are crawled by Google, and so can they be by SPAMBots. I'd suggest you to edit (or even remove) your e-mail. There's always the private message, where you can post your emails freely.

Cya! :anime: