Creative Writing A tear...

to those who need so much more...

I feel terrible to realize, so selfish am I
To forget about the others and not wonder why.
They have been hurt so much more than I, by
The wrath of nature that has caused so many to die.
With no way there and no time to spare, selfish am I.
The only thing I can do right now is sit here and cry.

 

umm... whats the point of this?

give a small story or something.

 

Yes it is true it makes no sense unless you have 1. looked at the other thread I started (Hurricane Katrina) and 2. know that I like to emotionally abuse myself for putting myself before others. I really hate myself for being depressed for trivial things. I have suffered nothing compared to so many in the world and yet I whine and complain about stupid stuff... for more see my diary, RPfishh at OpenDiary.

 

wow, im really into really into long peoms. But i liked it, and i will check that out.

 

it was alright. i think there could have been a bit more feeling to it.

not your best work. but i liked it.

 

Wow this is considered long? You should have seen the one I wrote to my mother when i moved out. It was like pages. Epic. I like this poem. I think we all feel sad at some point.