Creative Writing Abuse

This is a poem I wrote in 5 minutes. I cried while writing this, I can't help it. Sometimes my writings upset me so bad. Well this is ANOTHER poem dedicated to teenagers or children who are victims of child abuse. Oh and I tried a new tactic to my poetry.

Abuse

Abuse is being beat
every single day you wake
being critisized, untill you cry
of all the tiny mistakes you make
Abuse is unforgetful neglectance
that makes you want to believe
that the love that you strive and try to get
you'll need yet never will recieve
Abuse is a cry for help
that nobody bothers to hear
a life you try to hold and try to control
but can't quite get the wheel and steer
Abuse is a child's mind gone to waste
that gets more and more extreme
every time their put down and thrown down
for just wanting to have a dream
Abuse is a problem
that none of you bother to fix
long term wounds un-healed, teenagers killed
and you tell me you won't fix it?
Abuse is a pain no one wants to feel any more
no more black eyes, so bad you can't see
no more being beated, nor mistreated
Abuse is wanting to be free..

 

blue,that poem was sooooooooo touching its very good*grabs tissue and blows nose on it*

 

it is a very good poem blue

 

Blue: I know that this poem came from the bottom of your heart. I wish it wasn't as sad as it's beautiful

*hugs*

Look, you need to stop listening to those voices that tell you that you're not worthy. You need to gather strength and confront them. The way you were raised turned you into what you believe you are. But in reality, you are what you want to be. Don't despair! Set yourself a goal and accomplish it. Or at least try, you lose nothing by trying. And then, you can evaluate yourself, did I do it right? Wrong? What mistakes did I make? How can I correct them?

Remember, what really should be important TO YOU is not the result, but the effort you put in it. You are a wonderful human being, and nothing can change that. *hugs*

Oh yeah I forgot Wonderful poem there.

 

Nice poem Blue, it had a lot of feeling in it, as well as a message. Very nicely written.

 

Very good poem again Peachy. It's nice to read your writtings.