Art Amber, check her out!

one of my new characters, personally, i'm not happy with her. there's something i dont like...but 'til i figure it out, tell me your impressions, suggestions, heck, insult me if you want but reply!




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Nice, bold line work. One of the things wrong with it is that each eye is looking in a different direction. Cover one eye with your hand, then switch eyes, and you'll see what I mean. I have that problem too sometimes. Also, some highlights in her hair, especially at the top/front, would add more dimension to her head, as well as a lil dazzlement. How old is she? She could pass for anywhere from elementary to high school freshman, but overall she looks like a preteen.

 

Great Picture!

 

Your work is both recogniseable and appealing to me. This one inclusive... Your style has been well established.

 

Wooo love the eyes... But I see what seraphinx was talking about.. actually, I agree with a lot of what he had to say... Very cute style.. I like her mouth's expression too

 

thanks for replying, seraphinx, youre right, thanx man(cant believe i forgot the highlights). her age? i would say 17-19 or something....

going back to the design room, byes

p.s. the eyes....i dont like them...they draw to much attention, what do you think?

 

I guess that's part of why I like them XD That and I've always been partial to yellow eyes

 

where did her shoulder go?

 

u_u i only did this to have an idea on how will she looke like, kind of like a sketch

 

I like it...but there is a couple things wrong with it imo...and Im not an artist or anything so you dont have to listen to me...but there is something wrong with the eyes...and her body kinda disappears after her hair but other than that....great job

 

1- you don't need to be an artist to criticize someone's artwork, just the way i dont need to be a cook to know something tastes awful

2- oh yes, the eyes are misplaced(each one looks in a different direction u_u) and the missing shoulder, as i said before, this is just a sketch

3-thanks for posting

4-see ya!

 

seraphin, did what you said and it seems to improve a little, maybe i'll post it later. thanks

 

thanx Seraphin, it really improved. now both eyes look in the same direction, gotta do something about that eyebrown tho.

thanx again!!!!

click the attachment to compare, first is seraphin's, way better!

 

ps. i dont think a single smile = spam. remember, a picture is worth a thousand words

 

I hate posting, because for some reason, it takes hours for my computer to type things. S'reason why u ppl haven't seen much of me. Anyway, I felt it necessary to tell you, you're a ****in' good artist dood. Your cg's are always very crisp, and *shrug* there are mistakes, but you're learning, and yes. I like your style darling. *thumbs up*


p.s You need cooler names. Yeah. here, go play.

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and I'm sure if you google, you can find some other cool sites for this kinda stuff. Cheers.

 

Seraphin: ummmm....great idea! it takes me a while to include them but i love them!

Koge: yahoo! thank you very much i dont use japanese names, it's not that i dont like them, i think that japan has way too many stories already, so my story develops somewhere in america, regular guys with regular names anyways, one