Creative Writing Angel of Light

There was this day
when the sun did not shine
the world was gray
and no one was fine

Their hearts were blue
their tears dried up
they had no clue
they gave it all up

They could not see
they could only decline
then something broke free
something define

An angel of eternal light
came down on earth
she was all that is right
and gave love birth

Love embraced the universe
Love gave life to all that is
Love gave reason to existence
Love gave a perpose to hate


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okies ppl... a bit childish maybe? but I think I did well

 

Beautiful. God I love your poems. Keep it up! Or ill hang you by your teeth

 

thnx. I have a fan.. lol well your poems are very good and thanks for the inspiring pep talk haha

 

She Crazy, i'd keep writing if i were you...

nice Poem

 

Very good. Keep it up. (Now I'll have to think of something else everyone is using it )

 

thats okay thanks very much.. I am happy people like it..

 

i really liked.

 

I am glad to hear that. For I do make the poems for myself but I am always happy to hear that people appreciate my "work"