Creative Writing another one...god im weird..

Everyone esle is posting a lot so here I go!no offens anyone

Society

All they ever want to do or even say
its the children in this society
that making this world this way
They never ever thought about us
scared to go home and stay
To someone who doesn't care
And beats you every day
Thye never ever thought about how we felt
when we were punched and kicked around the school yard
and no one tried to help
They always think we do things just to see an effect
when every day all we try to do
is earn our own respect
Its the society today that makes you all believe
that its the kids that are doing all this
when its the people around us
that brings us to our knees

 

woah this poem is so... well gives me kinda the shivers
its good.. and so true and so deep

MAKE MORE! (if you feel like it)

 

I agree with Silverline. It's pretty good. I like it.

I have to put up a poem soon, I haven't written one. Though I have no idea what I'll write about. But that's always the case with me, right? *wink*

Keep up the work, Hazel. You're getting along just fine.

 

i really enjoyed it, and it has more truth than most people realize. keep up the good work.