Creative Writing Bacteria of Pain

Ok, now you guys are probably beginning to think that I'm really messed up because of all these poems, but I was told once that everyone has the power to hurt beyond belief, and that my poems are just exposing all the hurt that I've kept hidden for the past 4 years. So I'm not insane(just crazy ) this is just telling what I feel about everything that's happened to me.

In the days that have gone by,
Are things that rest but do not die.
They lay in wait until the day,
When erosion again shows the way.
Shows the tunnel to the light,
Once again coming to fight.
Burrowing deep insidet he brain,
Bringing again the endless pain.
They are the things that know no love,
They hide within like a magicians dove.
Only to emerge at your weakest moment,
Dragging you closer to you opponent.
And when they strike bringing the end,
You will no longer be able to defend.
Defend yourself and those around,
Now you'll die without a sound.
You will lose the things you love,
All in just one little shove.
Gone you are are remembered your not,
You lay in the ground destined to rot.

 

Little grammar errs. Spelling also. Like Bacteria. But I have Word.

I also liked the poem. It was different I must say. The ending made it very good and fall together.

 

lol yesh im not that great of a speller or grammar person lol but yesh, you liked the ending? cool my brother told me i was messed up lol

 

If you want to post a hundred poems on here about everything you've been through, go right ahead because I won't mind answering to those hundred threads. I like reading poems, even though I can't very well make them. When I really want to make something, that's what I go for and I don't care what others say. If you want to post your poems, please feel free to do so.

If someone tells you that you're messed up, then maybe they don't understand what you are going through. In my mind, no one is messed up, its just a part of their personality and no one would be able to change that. Its only bad if it hurts themselves and others.

Its a very good poem.

 

It's all good. Poems get everything out..WHY DO YOUR POEMS ALWAYS MAKE ME CRY! ^^ You made Peachy/Krisis cry twice..SHAME ON YOU EONI! It's great. Keep writing. I love them more than any others i've read.

 

AWWWW!! Thanx Lance..ur kinda than some of the other people on here...Krisis..mom...im sawry i made u cry..thankies for all ur support