Art beyond the blue sky

http://www.deviantart.com/view/1755019

i had to CG this twice.. =_=;
when i finished it the first time, painter unexpectedly quit while i was saving, so the file got damaged and wouldn't open...
so.. i had to color it all over again T_T
anyways.. she was meant to be an angel, but i couldn't be bothered drawing her wings.. so yeah ^^; i think her neck is a lil too long and the head doesn't connect with the rest of the body...?

 

its pretty good done

 

I think that's just sai's style...the very thin girls. I know it's not realistic, but I'm getting used to it. The clothing is nice in this one.

 

wow, thats amazing, but yeah, a little on the skinny side.....but other wise, it is great. thats a cool picture!

 

thanks a lot for comments!

like i said on the other thread, this is my style ^^; it's a lil hard to fix.. i know it's not very realistic, but it's anime not realistic anyways (excuse.. lol)

 

thats nice. i would say your style is thin with long arms. haha. once again like the colors.

 

ok everything doesnt have to be realistics right

 

Well, I can't say I'm too partial to your drawing style, but the CG work is flawless, and very well done. Mainly I don't like the lack of detail in her face, but that's just me, the cg work makes up for it.

[edit] After a second long look, I think it's merely the conflict in shading detail I am noticing in the face. You've obviously spent a lot of time working on shading the dress and hair, but not much on the face. Also, as a few people have said, those arms are just a wee bit long. [/edit]

- Ark

 

OH WOW I love your style, really! Not too skinny I think it's great and inspiring. Your painting technique needs work, but not to worry you are still young you will be great!

+dewatch

 

its good but its also too skinny and the hands r messed up.

 

Well, the style is different. I'm not all for the skinny/uberlong limbed look either, but the hands are well drawn imo. The CG work is really good. It sorta reminded me for a minute of an episode of Noir with that girl....what was her name...Sophia? The mafia one that fought Mireille. S'cool episode, that was. *sighs happily*

 

hey great style you got ther! keep it up!

 

I think overall it is really good I do not think she is "TOO" thin because her arm is in the way it would be to soon to assume that she ends where her arm begins yea... I looked again her left hand is alittle messe up but that should be somewhat easy to fix right? I mean I have never worked with cg's before let alone do I know what the hell cg means (Btw hint hint what does it mean?) but overall you did a great job!