Creative Writing Black

Discussion in 'Written Arts' started by Cascade dream, Jun 26, 2005.

  1. Cascade dream

    Cascade dream New Member

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    Black

    Black as the midnight ride of the Raven,
    Black as the wings in his Haven.
    Black is the color of his midnight call
    Black with dried blood after it hath fall
    Black is the symbol of his power
    Black holds the death of those he devours.

    Black is witheld in his mind
    Black has a revenge that is not kind
    Black is the force of his will
    Black is his insanity and the reason he will kill.

    Black is the darkness that consumes his mind
    Forever calling darkness to others of his kind
     
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  2. Nephilim_X

    Nephilim_X New Member

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    Black is the colour of a telephone that never rings.[​IMG]

    I'll be blunt here - I've seen the same sort of thing a million times over from a million other "gothish" posters. It's generic.
     
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  3. Cascade dream

    Cascade dream New Member

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    I have to agree with you...I just had nothing to better to do one day so I just wrote it...I'm actually not gothic at all,just another oddball who writes the same old thing I s'pose
     
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  4. Peachy

    Peachy ☆liberal HMod☮

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    dude delete on of those. Hey its not bad its just like most others. I liked it.
     
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  5. Cascade dream

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    Yeah I deleted one.Just pushed one to many buttons I guess...Like I said It's just the same old thing...boredom just takes over sometimes ya-know?
     
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  6. yakamashi

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    didn't sound bad at all to me...!

    just, so much... black.
     
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