Creative Writing Broken heart

Discussion in 'Written Arts' started by Cascade dream, Jul 29, 2005.

  1. Cascade dream

    Cascade dream New Member

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    What is evil compared to a broken heart?
    They both have their own poisoned dart.
    Passion and anger both have their day,
    But they must also fade away.

    Hate and anger keep love at bay,
    But losing love drains ones will away.
    Both can corrupt someones mind,
    Both have effects that are not kind,

    To have love is heaven, to lose it is hell,
    Maybe evil and lost love cast the same spell?

    It's not a good poem, but it's special in a way... I wrote this after my boyfriend broke up with me and I wrote about it...Kinda weird huh?
     
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    Cascade dream, Jul 29, 2005
  2. Hitokiri Tenma

    Hitokiri Tenma New Member

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    It's good, i like it. I'm sorry to hear that your boyfriend broke up with you.
     
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    Hitokiri Tenma, Jul 29, 2005
  3. Kryshana

    Kryshana Dont try to understand me

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    Wow...very good! I can kind of relate to that poem...it was very nice! ^_^
     
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    Kryshana, Jul 30, 2005
  4. Peachy

    Peachy ☆liberal HMod☮

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    ouch.. wow, that was good. O great..now im depressed! :p
     
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    Peachy, Jul 30, 2005
  5. Locke

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    just one of those days
     
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    Locke, Jul 30, 2005
  6. child of sin

    child of sin ★★★★☆

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    did i say before that love is gay!? :anime:
     
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