Art can i get some opinions? ^^

Discussion in 'Visual Arts' started by Kaori, Jan 17, 2003.

  1. Kaori

    Kaori New Member

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    er..i made two GFXs..and i need some constructive criticism..^_^

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    Any helpful ideas is appreciated ^________^ thankies!
     
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    Kaori, Jan 17, 2003
  2. Bloodberry

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    oooo pretty. what did you want again? you do very nice work there. *^-^*
     
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    Bloodberry, Jan 17, 2003
  3. Phalanx

    Phalanx Long Live M2A!

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    Nice work.
    But on the first pic, the four characters have only a bit of color while the backround is every color of the rainbow. They need to blend in together a little bit more so that way there isn't such a sharp contrast (unless thats what your want). You did a better job on the second pic, but it still is a step from being one smooth piece. Again, nice work and keep at it.
     
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    Phalanx, Jan 17, 2003
  4. Shen

    Shen Indefinately away

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    I think the first one looks good the way it is. There isn't much to criticise here...sorry. But comon, if no one criticises then its good enough to a masterpiece.
     
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    Shen, Jan 17, 2003
  5. Phalanx

    Phalanx Long Live M2A!

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    I think it would be more benificial for Kaori to have some reasonable critizism (not numbnut BS) rather than people always saying how good they are. True, they are nice, but be picky, tell the guy what you don't like (hell, thats what I did and thats why Kaori posted them here).
     
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    Phalanx, Jan 19, 2003
  6. Zanza

    Zanza .Net-ing & PHP-ing~*
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    I loved the first one, while I think that the 2nd needs to be more colorful and the background should be a bit darker I think..
    Or just make the background more colorful, I mean that the tru colors appear but still its brigh, perhaps remove that "light" or "bright" thing? oO


    Well, I didn't wanted to post a new topic and make a mess, but here is my first background, it's really nothing, just that, I am so proud of it!!! :D

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    specially the color mix :p
     
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    Zanza, Jan 29, 2003
  7. chiquitabanana

    chiquitabanana finally legal

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    I love clover!

    is really good but confusing... u should hav put the guy in it!!!
     
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    chiquitabanana, Jan 29, 2003
  8. Kaori

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    oo..nice Zanza ^^ the color blend is really nice. i think the leaf print coulda been a bit more prominent, but its nice ^^

    and chiquita, i only made that since i only had the image of the girl XD i've never seen chobits.
     
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    Kaori, Jan 30, 2003
  9. Zanza

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    heh thanx Kaori.. believe it or not, that's my current BG atm :p
     
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    Zanza, Jan 30, 2003
  10. Sachiko

    Sachiko happy SMJ shoujo ^_^

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    Three words:

    I love them!!!!
     
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    Sachiko, Feb 3, 2003

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