Creative Writing Cold War

Discussion in 'Written Arts' started by Warsaw Pact, Feb 28, 2006.

  1. Warsaw Pact

    Warsaw Pact New Member

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    The 2nd great war is over. We liberated millions.
    Now a new monster is forming. Freedom is at risk.
    Asia, Africa, South America, they strike and try to take.
    We aid the locals, we help them fight the monsters claiming help the people.

    We do well. The world is going our way.
    We feel that freedom has been attained.
    They smile, we smile. They fight we fight.

    Then all things went wrong I do not understand.
    In the end we failed was the fight fixed.
    The base of freedom was lost. Our allies fell too.
    With our wall to keep the Facsist out gone.
    So is Lenin's dream. So is the dream of the people.
     
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    Warsaw Pact, Feb 28, 2006
  2. Chance

    Chance Admitted Pokemon Fan.

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    Hm..It was original and I actually liked the rhythm you had with it. Good job Warsaw pact. =P
     
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    Chance, Feb 28, 2006
  3. sweetasuka

    sweetasuka Ahh Ice-Cream!

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    That was a good poem. It seems like you put a lot of thought into it. I look forward to reading any other poems you may come up with. :)
     
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    sweetasuka, Feb 28, 2006
  4. Basher

    Basher Mad Writing Skillz

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    I can so tell you’re a communist but to each his or her own. Your work is interesting. It is nice to see another opinion on certain events. I look forward to more.
     
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