Creative Writing Confused

Discussion in 'Written Arts' started by Moonie, Mar 27, 2003.

  1. Moonie

    Moonie New Member

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    I thought I was one thing
    It turns out I'm another
    I just realized this.

    We had already made our plans
    To come together forever
    I don't want to hurt you
    But I need to change that.

    I love you
    And I love someone else too
    I am so confused
    What shall I do?

    I'm lost
    I'm torn inside
    I'm torn through love
    I'm so confused.
     
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    Moonie, Mar 27, 2003
  2. Kirei na kimyou

    Kirei na kimyou New Member

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    Nice rime :D
     
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    Kirei na kimyou, Mar 28, 2003
  3. Basher

    Basher Mad Writing Skillz

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    Good job;)
     
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    Basher, Mar 30, 2003
  4. Sahoko

    Sahoko New Member

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    cool.:p
     
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    Sahoko, Apr 20, 2003

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