Creative Writing Criticize or realize

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  1. silverline

    silverline New Member

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    Criticize or Realize (dont take this poem too serious)

    People getting annoyed by little things so hard to bare
    A thing that is deeply sad but you know I just dont care
    I know that you can’t please them all, of that I am aware
    And critize about what I dont know, I would never dare
    Some people just complain about everything and more
    For them its like they are constantely fighting in a war
    But people like that make me just feel bloody bored
    And when they read this poem they think its too short

    I could go on for hours, but then I would just go insane
    Isn’t it just fun to say your opinion or just to complain
    Lets just hope that when you do it, you can maintain
    Or another person will push you out of a flying airplane
    And I know that some who read this, feeling so wise
    Are reading my poem, they can not wait to criticize
    But do you really think that all I say is build on lies?
    Maybe this poem is just something that’s quite nice
     
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  2. Yossarian

    Yossarian Yossarian Lives!

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    ....nice....
     
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