Creative Writing Dark Prince

(This poem is about a vampire,though I give no hint of this I think...)

My dark prince with your midnight kiss
Those violet eyes that I will miss
Roaming in darkness and it's dark caress
Wandering around feeling your finess

The pain you feel when your victim falls
The blood tears that comply with your calls
You hate yourself and the one who made you this way
Despising you for hiding you from the light of day

Your master has condemed you to him forever
Your only escape is on the wings of feather
Drawn to the darkness and it's soulfull call
Your body so beaten that you have to crawl

The black rose that represents your feelings
Only you know it's deep meanings
Oh,my dark prince your lips so sweet
How have you survived this terrible feat

Thine fallen Angel you heart is pure
You represent the everlasting cure
Your black wings cascade the night
taking you on you midnight flight
Soaring you into the magnificent night

 

man that was freakin awesome. vampires? God you must have been watching Alucard on Hellsing as much as I have...Well great poem. *shrieks* turns into a bat and flies away.

 

holy crap... that poem was AWESOME!!!!!!!! heh, vampires are so cool... and there ARE some hints.... [kinda]

like...
ex. Despising you for hiding you from the light of day....

Thine fallen Angel you heart is pure.....

and some other stuff... not that it really matters... heh.

 

Thank you!!!!

I don't share my poems often...I always thought that they were really bad...As a matter of fact this is the first place I've ever posted them.

 

Nice. I am glad you did post your poem here. Some have inspired me to remove the dust from my old poem book and revise them.