Creative Writing Darkest World

An era in time, forging will,
none are without pain, sorrow and lies.
All are dead and none are free,
Secrets torn and secrets born.

A past untold,
a past gone wrong,
a blood stain sword in the darkest path,
a dark past untold while people die.

The will of people burn in flame,
some run while others die.
A shattered world of blood and war,
tales of war that chill the soul.

Weak at heart but strong in flame,
fall from truth when it comes from the grave.
Strong at heart but weak in flame,
fall to power when lies are told.

Weapons break and weapons fall,
none bring life when times are torn.
A life unsaid, a life unturned,
a life untold by the darkest world.

 

dude that so just touched me. It made me vision myself in a dark room chanting it ^^ great poem!

 

Thank you, I really just made it on the spot. I changed a few things and stuff but yeah, I really did make it like.....five minutes ago.

 

That's awsome,it made me feel like I was on an ancient battle field of feudal japan!

 

To each his or her own. I for one was sitting here in front of the computer reading a good poem. I am glad you decided to join b.jp.