Creative Writing Dedicated to Jennifer

Jennifer, You have Gone Too Soon

Fading away with the shadow
Slowely when the sun goes down
Shining above your pretty head
Like a huge, golden crown

Stretch out your long, white arms
Like the wings of a young swan
Embrace the world with warmth
Like the mother and her son

Jennifer, Jennifer, Jennifer
Running through my mind
Like a snowball off the hill
Brightness makes me blind

You took the train with a smile
I placed you there myself
You looked so very cheerful
Even with your bad health

You never ever came home
Never reached your destiny
I guess the angels took you back
And placed you in infinity

Jennifer, Jennifer, Jennifer
Child of the sun, child of the moon
Child of the planets, child of the stars
Jennifer you have gone too soon

Blown away by memories
Blown away by time
Blown away by the wind
Remembered in this rhyme

 

is it about someone you know? Its a very beautiful poem... im sorry if it was someone close to you.... *hugs*

 

Thank you, it is kind of about a person I know yes..
and thnx for the hug

Yeah I am glad it turned out this good.

 

very nice, good work.

 

Very nice and I hope you are doing better from this loss. But look to stars and heaven for what they have gained.

 

Trapped in my poetic game of Eucher,
with an evil Trump of Spade,
you remind me of that girl,
who dumped me in fourth grade.

 

yes it was a very sad story actually, when I think about it still makes me sick and I dont dare to go out on the streets at night alone. But I guess things like that just happen and theres not much you can do about it.

But thank you all, I appreciate your comments, and thats a nice poem, is it really the truth?

Poems are just a way for me to express myself, in my best way

 

Yep it is good. Don't pay attention to Neph. He can be a big goon sometimes.

That is the way poems should be.

 

Okay, lol and thank you