Creative Writing Does life go on after death?

Discussion in 'Written Arts' started by Sango-the ex, Mar 27, 2003.

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What do you thing of my writing??

  1. It's excellent!!!!

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  2. it's ok...

    1 vote(s)
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  3. you could do better

    2 vote(s)
    22.2%

  4. It stunk!!!!

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  1. Sango-the ex

    Sango-the ex New Member

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    A girl wonders looking for her love.... she looks alive.... though she is no more... Her sorrow and hatred for her love keeps her here.... For time stands still all around her.... season come and season go, but she still has not had her revenge on her lover.....but it turned out she was wrong..... it was not her lover who betrade her...
     
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    Sango-the ex, Mar 27, 2003
  2. Kirei na kimyou

    Kirei na kimyou New Member

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    Friggin' excellent! I just love stuff like that! :D
     
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    Kirei na kimyou, Mar 28, 2003
  3. Shadowhawk

    Shadowhawk New Member

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    Doing great girl! Keep it up! :)
     
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    Shadowhawk, Mar 30, 2003
  4. Rebos

    Rebos New Member

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    me ask..

    Real cool!
    Anyway, is it an proluge of a story youre writing?
    :)
     
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    Rebos, Apr 1, 2003
  5. ::ZodiacStone::

    ::ZodiacStone:: New Member

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    You go girl!! :) lol.


    Great job so far! I would add a bit to it though just to grab more people to it and make them wanna keep going!! And go back and check your spelling. I know the one thing I can't stand about some stories/fanfics, is bad spelling! :mad:

    But anyway- Great so far! Keep it up!
     
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    ::ZodiacStone::, Apr 2, 2003
  6. Mika-chan

    Mika-chan New Member

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    I liked it. sorry, not gonna say too much on it.. too tired. ^^ but I'd love to read more!

    ~Lil' Mika~
     
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    Mika-chan, Apr 7, 2003
  7. Influences

    Influences New Member

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    Um....Inu Yasha...reminds me alittle to much of that but other then that you got the right idea keep killin the lines
     
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    Influences, Apr 8, 2003

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