Creative Writing Dreams

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  1. Peachy

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    This is a poem I dedicate to someone, as you can see when you read it. What i'm technically saying, is i'm looking for a way out. A golden door, and people say my wish is a wish. I'm testifying that it is a dream, and most dreams come true. I just have a little bit more..Enjoy guys.

    Dream

    There's my opening, how i've waited
    I finally reached the end of my dream
    untill I hear a voilent scream
    now i'm back in the real world
    just another emo teenage girl
    Stop dreaming I tell myself
    things will never change
    silly fantasies will never help
    I pull my head up and look around
    to this cruel place I call home
    to this place I am forever bound
    this dreams are all I have
    to a hope of the outstetched hand of my dad
    is that really that pathetic?
    that I miss something that i've had?
    I feel my steps getting closer to the ending
    in every day I am spending
    running towards the bright light
    it's so crazy to obsess over a wish in my heart
    but somehow deep inside, to me it feels right
    No matter what you say
    I'll touch that handle some day
    and all my pain will fade away
    you say a wish is a wish
    and wishes seldom come true
    but this dream is not a wish
    it's a troubled path i'm making my way through
    Believe in yourself, I say out loud
    as I once again run to the golden door
    you can do it Peachy, Just a little bit more
    echoes of critism hit my ears
    it's so hard not to give up hearing what I hear
    but this thing I want isn't what it seems
    this wish is not a wish I say again
    this is my deepest dream
    i'll fullfill someday when I reach that door
    you'll never take that away from me..


    mom...
     
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