Art Fallen angel.

Discussion in 'Visual Arts' started by Feena, May 31, 2004.

  1. Feena

    Feena New Member

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    Kagome's Arrow Princess of Unicorns

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    Wow, that's really pretty! Then again, I know about as much about artwork as I do about trigonometry (which I barely even know the definition of), so don't count what I say for much :D. Still, I think it's gorgeous!
     
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  3. RaineR

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    its not bad, though im sure sure you can do better. first off the anatomy (everyone gets this part wrong) is off, but thats bout it. ^^" oh try and thicken your lines a bit more, cuz i can barely see it. @.@
     
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  4. Feena

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    Yeah my scanner shrunk the picture and cut out the wings a bit, so I lost some of the detail *kicks scanner*, her eyes , nose and mouth appear to be missing >_< .Ummm, yeah, I've been working on proportions and anatomy since then....having a bit of trouble with hands and stuff, I'm improving, slowly, but I'm getting there.

    Ty for the comments, I appreciate it :) .
     
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  5. Dante

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    Yeah, I can tell the scan-job messed with a few things (I bloody hate it when that happens >:) but overall the picture looks nice, it has a nice, smooth-lined look to it, like all the lines just seem to flow together. If I had to make a comment about one thing it would probably be her left hand (on our right side). The hand just looks a bit awkward and the cross looks a bit plain and flat. But, yah, besides that very nice picture.

    Keep up the good work.
     
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  6. Spiggy

    Spiggy Freak of Nature

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    yeah the left hand does look a bit weird but i wouldn't have noticed if Amon hadn't said! :anime:
    but very nicely drawn
     
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    Nice job on the cross, you but geat detail in it, and the face is geat. Thats better than I could ever do :anime:
     
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    I like it. It looks really nice.
    The wings need a little work, but besides that, great job! ^.^ You're very good with faces and expretions.
     
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  9. Feena

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    Ty :) , I kind of intended the wings to just be plain and jagged like that, I was kinda thinking about something in the way of a dragon silhouette (I can't spell , sorry ^_^; ) in the winds and they were gonna be kind of more jaggedy and almost broken looking, but it didn't really work out. Also wtf was I thinking in that first post? So many typos o_O; .
     
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