Gundam fanfic4u-from~me

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  1. Meaikoh

    Meaikoh See you later, Moderator

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    Ok, so I’m gonna try my hand at some Gundam Wing fan-fic. I recommend this to veterans of Gundam Wing, who have seen the series. First of all, I’d like to point out several things:
    1. Wouldn’t you like to see Heero admit he likes Relena?
    2. You know how Relena says: “Heero...”, then it zooms to Heero and he looks up?
    3. Notice how alot of names are numbers? And for the gundam pilots check this out:
    Duo’s name means 2 and his Gundam is 0-2.
    Quatre’s name means 4 in french and his Gundam is 0-4
    I’m pretty sure Trowa means 3 and look: Gundam 0-3!
    Other guys with numbers for names:
    Treize means 13.
    Quinze means 15.
    Pretty sure Milliardo means, like a million or a thousand.

    Ok, now let’s start this:


    Heero Yuy was tuning up his gundam. Three thousand miles away, Relena Peacecraft looked up: “Heero...”
    Heero looked up at the sky, shrugged and continued to make the final adjustments to Wing Zero. He had heard that White Fang was making a comeback in Chile. Suddenly he ****ed his head to the left. He hadn’t expected to be bothered here, way back in the wilderness. It sounded like an aircraft landing. He decided that he would rest as soon as he finished the ****pit adjustments, he was beginning to hear things. Of course, he had never heard things before and trusted his instincts, but who would possibly come way back here? Suddenly a twig cracked. He turned his head slightly and out of the corner of his eye he saw somebody coming towards him. He drew a gun from inside his shirt.
    “Hmm...”
    The person was getting closer. Heero decided to pretend not to have heard them.
    Then something touched him from behind. In seconds his gun was leveled at the face of--- Duo Maxwell, fellow Gundam Pilot.
    “Hey, I’d appreciate it if your gun was--not pointed at my face. So what’s up, Heero?”
    “The White Fang are making a come-back in Chile, I’m tuning up Zero.”
    “Not that! I meant how are you?”
    “What do you care for?”
    Duo sighed. “Geez, you try to be nice to some people... Anyway, I thought I’d come with you to Chile.”
    “You can do what you want, I can’t stop you.”
    “Right, well, I guess I’d better get my buddy Deathscythe ready for action, huh?”
    “Whatever you say.”


    Relena Peacecraft, former Queen Relena, was back in her old school, The St. Gabriel’s Institution. Her old friends were all there, but they acted different towards her.
    Admiration, awe, maybe jealousy, replaced the casual conversations of old.
    “So, Relena, I bet the school dance coming up seems alot more boring from what you’re used to.”
    “No, I’d appreciate if you treated me the same way you always treated me, I’m no different from you. I’m here to learn and I have to respect the rules just like everyone else.”
    “Ok, Miss Relena.”
    “There you go again! Please, stop it. Just call me Relena.”
    “I just couldn’t! You were so brave and you’ve changed alot since last we saw you in person!”
    “Well, anyway you look at it, I’ll be at the dance having fun just like everyone else.”
    “Oh! Did you see the new boy? He’s supposed to come from a rich family in the colonies! I think his last name was ‘Winner’ or something like that...”
    ~Could it be Quatre? ~, Thought Relena curiously. “Did you happen to catch his first name? Was it Quatre?”
    “Oh, gee, Relena, I don’t know...I think it might’ve been, but I can’t be certain. I suppose we’ll know soon enough, at the assembly.”
    “I think there was two new boys who know each other. The other’s last name is something like ‘Barter’.”
    “Yeah! I can’t wait for assembly! Remember the last time we got a new boy? That Heero character?”
    “Heero...”, said Relena with a sigh.


    Heero looked up from inside the truck they were using to load the Gundams.
    “What is it, Heero?”, said Duo.
    “Nothing.”
    “Okay...”
    “Come on, Duo, let’s finish loading the gundams up.”
    “Right, we need to get to Chile soon.”
    “We might not even have anything to do. It is just a rumor and maybe Zechs’ll take care of it, since he’s no longer with white fang.”
    “Did you forget that he died in battle?”
    “Oh Yeah.”
    “But still, that is close to where Wufei headed after we obtained peace.”
    “Last time I heard from him, he was meditating under a waterfall.”
    “So like him, meditating under a rock somewhere near Chile.”


    At the assembly, everybody craned their necks, hoping to get a glimpse of the new boys. The director of the institution tapped the microphone and cleared her throat.
    “Hello, students, I would like you to please quiet down now.”
    Everybody continued to chatter.
    “Students, please! We have two new students to present to you today. (And in an undertone... ‘That’ll make them shut up...’)
    Everybody was quiet.
    “I would like to present to you; Quatre Raberba-Winner and Trowa Barton.”
    Forgetting herself, Relena exclaimed out loud: “It IS them!”
    Everybody twittered politely.
    “Miss Relena! I would expect you to have a bit more self-control!”
    “I’m sorry, it’s just that I know them.”
    Quatre looked up. “Miss Relena, is it you?”
    “Hello, Quatre.”
    “Trowa, look, its Miss Relena!”
    “Right, well, you may welcome them later, Relena. We must continue with assembly.”


    “Relena! You know those guys? You sure do get around!”
    One of Relena’s old best friends spoke up. “So, what’s the story on the cute blond?”, she giggled.
    “Oh, nothing. If you really want to know, ask him yourself.”
    “Miss Relena, I didn’t know you went to the St. Gabriel’s Institute.”, said Quatre, coming into the dining room with Trowa.
    “So, how did you two end up here?”, asked Relena.
    “Well, Trowa went back to the circus for a while, but he decided to come for a visit. Well, from there we decided to go back to school.”


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  2. Meaikoh

    Meaikoh See you later, Moderator

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    Fact: I just started this today, so I wanna know if I should write more, or is it just a waste of time? Feedback, peepz.

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  3. Meaikoh

    Meaikoh See you later, Moderator

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    More of the story
    So far...read up in the page [​IMG]


    One of the guys spoke up: “How do you just decide to go back to school? Also, are you guys any good at fencing?”
    “Hehehe, just because that other guy, Heero, embarrassed you, do you have to fence everybody?”
    “Well, to answer your question, I took fencing in my other school and I’m pretty good, I guess.”, said Quatre.
    “I’ve never fenced before.”, said Trowa in that voice of his.
    “Well, I look forward to seeing you in class then.”
    Another one of Relena’s friends spoke: “Gee, I wonder if he’s as good as Heero with horses.”, she giggled.
    “I’m beginning to think you have an infatuation with my friend Heero Yuy, anyway I love Horses!”, said Quatre.
    “Same here.”, said Trowa.
    “No way! I don’t like Heero, I think...”
    “Huh? You know Heero?”
    “Ah, oops! No! Of course not! I just, you know, my tongue ran away without me!”, said Quatre, realizing he had said too much.
    “Whatever you say. You’re strange, you know that.”
    “Come on, Quatre, I think we’d better go eat.”, said Trowa pointedly.
    “I’m coming too.”, said Relena.
    “Oh, sure, yes, let’s all go eat.”

    At the counter, they ordered the day’s special: Boeuf bourguenion with potatoes.
    They took a small table in the corner.
    “Whatever possessed you to stand up in assembly like that? I nearly hurt myself trying not to laugh!”, said Quatre pleasantly.
    “Me? Whatever possessed YOU to tell them you know Heero? He fought a mobile suit battle here, people could make the connection.”
    “Miss Relena, they could make the connection but I think they won’t. People don’t like to see what’s straight in front of them.”, said Trowa.
    “Yes, it’s true. I used to be just like them, you know.”, agreed Relena.
    “So classes start tomorrow at 9:30, right?”, said Trowa.
    “Yes, that’s right. Where did you hide your Gundams?”, asked Relena.
    “We hid them in that forest out back, far away from the pathways, of course.”, said Quatre.
    “I see. Well, now is your chance to do your favorite things, before we have our schedules. There is swimming, horseback riding, fencing, dancing, music, the library, computer lab and signing up for clubs.”
    “Sounds great. Where are you headed?”, asked Quatre
    “I’m going to head over to the library.”, said Relena.
    “I think I’ll go to music.”, said Trowa.
    “I’m going horseback riding, see you both at supper, Miss Relena, Trowa.”, said Quatre.


    “Hey, Heero, I got some mail from Quatre.”, called Duo.
    “What does it say?”, asked Heero.
    “It says that he and Trowa are at the St. Gabriel’s Institute.”
    “The St. Gabriel’s Institute?!”, exclaimed Heero, flashing back to when he first learned Relena’s name.
    “Yeah, that Relena girl is back there too.”
    “Relena...”
    “Huh? What did you say?”, said Duo.
    “Nothing, I cleared my throat.”
    “Whatever you say. Hey, do you remember when we were at that school together? Ha! I totally kicked your butt at basket-ball!”
    “That’s irrelevant. We should be in Chile soon.”
    “Ok, so what should I do?”
    “Well, just be ready. Who knows what we might find.”
    “Man, just try to use your head will you?”
    “Same to you.”
    “Huh?”
    “Oh, and send mail to Quatre. Tell him that he might want to come to Chile too. I hear a certain Dorothy Catalonia might show up.”
    “Oh yeah! You think Quatre will want to keep her out of trouble?”
    “Maybe.”
    “Ok. Hey! How far from Chile are we?”
    “About four hours.”
    “You’re just going to stay at the helm all that time?”
    “I guess so. Somebody has to direct the aircraft.”
    “Don’t you wanna eat?”
    “Hmm. I suppose I should.”
    “Why don’t we take shifts?”
    “Alright. That’s two hours each. I’ll take the first hour.”
    “Yeah, I’m having some chow.”


    Trowa put in the code to unblock the military files.
    ~Hmm, so White Fang is making a comeback in Chile. Oops, there’s some mail for Quatre, I guess I should tell him. I better go find him. ~



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    Thats realy quite good!
    Your an excelent writer:)
    I'm looking forward to your next post.:)
     
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    Meaikoh See you later, Moderator

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    Thanks, I haven't written much more because the computer that I have it on is broken. Luckily, it's saved on a disk. Promise to write more.:)
     
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    Meaikoh See you later, Moderator

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    Trowa looked around until he spotted Quatre, perfoming acrobacies on a chestnut flanked horse.
    Before Trowa spoke, Quatre noticed him.
    "Oh! Trowa! I thought you were in music class!", he said, performing a perfect dismount.
    "Actually...I went to the computer lab. You have some mail there. I think it's important.", said Trowa pointedly.
    "Oh. Oh! Um. Excuse me, ladies...", said Quatre, heading off to the computer lab. Trowa was left standing there akwardly.
    "Will you show us your horsemanship, Trowa Barton?", asked one of the girls, blushing like this :eek:.
    "Oh, um, yes. Of course, so sorry for interrupting Quatre's little show.", he said, obviously not thinking Quatre should do such things. He mounted the horse and prodded it gently. The horse obliged willingly and they were off, running like the wind under the cerulean skies. Trowa spent the rest of his free time exicuting difficult horse tricks.

    Quatre read the mail out loud to himself.
    "Dear Quatre,
    Hey, What's up, old buddy? (Heh, obviously Duo's writing to me.)
    Aparently, the old white fang crew is making a comeback. Although Quinze is dead and so is Zechs, they found some new leader. That crazy girl who likes battles, um, (Dorothy Catalonia, was it?), might show up. Just thought you'd like to know,

    ~Duo~"
     
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