Creative Writing fanfiction help 2 girls and a guy

Discussion in 'Written Arts' started by mimi-ayachan-mo, Aug 24, 2005.

  1. can someone give me any ideas to create a story about 2girls+1guy pleaze all 16! :sweat: :shy:
     
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  2. Nephilim_X

    Nephilim_X New Member

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    Once upon a time there were 2 girls and a guy, and both girls like the guy. However, the girls were also best friends, so they didn't say anything for fear of hurting one another. So the girls were silent, until they got a note in both their lockers.

    "JUNGLE GYM
    MEET ME AT 4
    -THE GUY"

    Their hearts raced, and off they went. But when they went there, the guy wasn't there. There was, however, a note.

    "HA HA
    FOOLED U
    LEAVE ME ALONE
    -THE GUY"

    Both girls, hearts broken, went home and cried for hours, and did a cross-posting in their xangas, livejournals and myspaces. Then they ate ice cream for hours while watching sitcoms and romantic comedies. In the end the girls got fat and bitter and graduated from high school angry and depressed. The guy was picked up to host The Tonight Show and became a great success in life, and as he became more and more famous and well loved, the girls lives collapsed in a spiraling plunge into total hopelessness.

    That was when an angel appeared.

    "WHAT HO" the angel said.

    "Hey angel can you help us feel better?" One girl said.

    "I AM HERE TO TEACH YOU A LESSON" the angel spoke loudly.

    Both girls smiled. "Teach us, teach us!"

    The angel stood tall and boomed "WHEN YOU RING A BELL AN ANGEL GETS ITS WINGS. AND ANGELS ARE DEAD PEOPLE, AND DEAD PEOPLE WHO WALK ARE JUST ZOMBIES. RAAAAAAAAA!!!"

    And the angel chased the girls for hours and hours and hours, thirsting for their brains. However, because of all this exercise, the girls began to lose the weight years of eating binges had packed onto their frames. Soon they were limber, lean little mynxes!

    They became famous models, and toured the world. And thats when The Guy asked them out for a date. But they did not forget his cruelty!

    They cooked up a marvelous, ingenious scheme, knowing that when they pulled it off it would humiliate The Guy for all his life, and ruin his career. They smirked as he approached the table, knowing in mere seconds vengeance would be theirs.

    Suddenly, a bus, in the hands of a maverick terrorist, burst through the wall of the restaurant, and side swiped the trio, ending their hateful lifes in an extremely painful instant.

    I CALL THIS STORY "EVERYTHING HAS A PRICE".
     
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  3. thanx for the 'help' but i need something w/ action :confused:
     
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  4. shinigami

    shinigami The Dark Prince

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    don't know

    How about this
    Both the girl and guy gets transported to a another world wherer they are said to be reincarnations of the three warriors of legned who saved the world befor but they were killed but the goddess of that world resurrected them on earth waiting for the day to when the evil force returns. Upon returnning they werer treated as kings (queens for the two girls) after the feast they had to journy across the land finding three weapons of legends ( excample . short spear of the immortal fire, two swords of the wind, and the heavens bow these are just examples you can make up different ones if you want to.) while searching for them they encontering the returnning evil forces and have to battle there way across the land searching for the weapons of legend to bring peace to the land. As they found the weapons they have to fight its guardian representing the power of the weapons, After they got they weapons they were tricked by the godesss. who she killed the real one she took the weapons to release the great dark king she had them exicuted but one of her holy fathers helped them to escape an told them that the weapons they hand were not real just fakes he said that the real ones were inside of them and they had to figure a way to summon them. tHen they did and they went after the goddess to defeat her and bring ture peace to the land.
     
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  5. sapphire_deity

    sapphire_deity New Member

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    From a land unknown, there passed a tale of angst and mystery.

    It began with an arrogant and handsome aristocrat. He was well-known for his obnoxious and snobbish manner that the townspeople developed inner hate for him. However, things began to change when a new person moved into the village. It was a good lady, of simplicity and humility. She opened a cake shop. With it, she touched the hearts of the townspeople.

    The wicked nobleman soon heard rumors about her. In fact, he seemed to hear stories about her everywhere---from his servants, his fellow gentlemen, and even from people of royalty. It disgusted him how a lowly peasant could attract that much attention so he decided to seek her out and see what others are so fascinated about her. But on his way to the town from his manor, he was robbed and roughly beaten. His used-to-be elegant clothes were torn and smudged with dirt everywhere. His hair was tousled and his face was full of bruises and cuts. He crawled all the way to the town, and the people he came across with ignored him as if they couldn't bear to be near him.

    Near the town gates was a lovely, decorated shop with exquisite and delicious-looking cakes on display. He desperately tried to reach its doorstep, but fell unconscious upon doing so. The girl saw the guy through the windows and brought him inside. She treated his wounds, and stayed by his side until he woke up. The guy--being the arrogant aristocrat that he is--questioned her intentions for helping him. The girl simply smiled and offered him a platter of the cake she thought he'd like most. He did not say anything bad about it, nor did he admit it tasted good. In time, he grew fond of her and yet, he never told a soul. Years passed, he visited her often, and whenever she would refer to him as a friend, he'd scowl at her and say, "Think not highly of yourself. I couldn't ever befriend a person of your status."

    The girl would only smile at him and give him an understanding look. All of a sudden, she acquired an incurable disease. She didn't tell him, only continued to smile at him and let him taste her new cakes. The night before she died, she left a note for him by the cake shop counter.

    "Be happy."

    For the first time, the guy cried. He cried for days, for weeks. One day, word got to him that another lady arrived in town. She looked very same like the deceased girl. Only that she wasn't ladylike at all. She hated noblemen, mostly. The guy couldn't help but look for her, and when he saw her, indeed she looked like the girl he knew. He tried to talk to her, but she'd try to punch him and kick him--any way to hurt him. Still he chased after her. In the end, she got tired of him and challenged him to a fight. Seeing always the girl who smiled at him and offered him cakes, he hadn't moved a finger. He died by the hands of the other girl. - The End
     
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  6. Teddz

    Teddz Sexy Swedish Love ♥

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    errr. Moved to creativy writing.

    - Teddz
     
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  7. Nephilim_X

    Nephilim_X New Member

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    It had a bus bursting through a wall and an angel chasing them! What more action could you need?
     
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  8. Ciel

    Ciel Unoa Freak
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    It's best you make your own story up. Write about what you know, school scenes, sports, gunfights in the mall with air-soft rifles.. that kind of thing. Ice Cream parlours bursting into flames.. after you get your fave mint chocolate ice cream though..
     
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  9. thanx for all of u guys help! :anime:
     
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  10. Basher

    Basher Mad Writing Skillz

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    A fanfiction ah.

    I have one too. But You should write your own.

    Once upon a time there was this chick and another chick and a male. They had many adventures together and many apart if you know what I mean. And in the end they all die.
     
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